rate_review Reviews

I will beta the HELL out of this story. :) You know how dearly I love it. I squealed a bit when I saw you'd updated--it was a bit embarrassing, really, and I scared my girlfriend. She thought one of our cats was dying, lol.

MPreg is always fun in this fandom, because the Inu no Taishou bloodline does need an heir! But whatever you decide will be more than spectacular, I'm sure, as all your other decisions thus far have been. I'm glad to see Kouga and Shippou got to stay. They're characters that are often underestimated in their ability to contribute to stories. As for the seme/uke dynamic (I think you asked about that, but it's entirely possible I'm wrong--it's quite late and I've been awake far too long today), I personally always always see InuYasha as a submissive, largely because he's had such a shitty life taking care of everyone else, he just needs one someone to care for him. That Sesshoumaru exudes seme, dominant, smug, I-will-make-you-experience-pleasure-you-couldn't-ever-dream-of helps, too. :) But, again, that's only my opinion, and who am I to argue if the public says otherwise?

That being said, while your first lemon was amazing, I squealed again when I saw that Sess was topping this time (don't worry, my girlfriend has since gone to bed). Once again, this was an amazingly detailed and well-written chapter. I could SEE what you were painting with your words, and I certainly enjoyed it. ;D I look forward to your next update!

Please you must finish this story, I want to read more. I wanna know what happens. This shit is awesome and funny and amazing. It truely is a piece of work. Please update as soon as possible.

Your story has intrigued me quite a bit. Love how Sesshomaru and Inuyasha are now slowly getting to work things out. Hope to see them get more closer to each other. Bringing in a bit of Xin's past life adds to the interest. Happy to see a visit from the old pack now and again. Can't wait for you to continue....

OMG this chapter was really good I hope you update soon I can't wait to see what happens next!! Please update soon!! :D

I like the story and I am really irritated because of two things: 1. In the first chapter where you inserted (Spoiler Alert). If you feel the need to warn other readers about this please put it in a seperate section in a header at the beginning of the story. It iturrupts the flow of the story, and draws me away from what in all is a pretty good plot line. 2. You halted the flow again in... I don't really remember what chapter, when you inserted another thing about having thoughts about being cruel and ending the chapter at a cliff hanger. I'm feeling kind of old because I cant concentrate on the writing after you do that, and I really want to because I like the work you are doing.
This is meant to be constructive. I am completely intrigued and definately giving you a nod to being one creativly smart cookie for using a comming of age trial to explain Sesshomaru's apparent hate for Inuyasha. It is pretty ingenious because you take advantage of the creative license for filling in what life is really like for an inuyoukai. And it solves the gigantic issue that anyone who writes a Sesshomaru/Inuyasha pairing has to overcome. That problem is consistancy with their personalities. You've given a nice neat and plausable reason for calling out Sesshomaru's actions as false. Definately giving you props there because this is one of the hardest pairings to write in the series. I am looking forward to reading new chapters, and I really hope you take my advice.
Happy writing.

I can't wait for Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru to finally mate. I so look forward to your next chapter!

this is really great I hope to read more soon...love the back story of why S was so mean to I.

Love the fic,just a quick question. Im more of inuyasha being the uke. Is he the uke in this fic? Hope to see more.

YAY for the update! :) and Sesshoumaru is totally Inuyasha's Alpha...the little hanyou is just in denial. lol but seriously, their relationship needs a lot of work and Inuyasha still needs to forgive Sesshoumaru, which seems to be progressing at their own pace. I like that they are not rushing, makes it more believable and sweet when they do finally get there in the end. And that final scene was incredibly hot and you are so cruel for leaving it as a cliff hanger. lol :) can't wait for next post.

Hoping for Sess uke!!!