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for A Kiss To Build A Dream On

by cakeiton

person Vyper
schedule July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good, but I was kind of hoping for more of a lemon. That is ok though since it is a cute story so far.
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Upon review of your story, it was noticed that you cite/quote from another source, but that it is not properly cited.

Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
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Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.

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