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by AikawaAkihiko

person Silver
schedule May 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you update soon this was a lovely story
person melissalee
schedule May 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*throws cookies at the auther* must keep our auther happy so he/she writes more!!!
person pinkroses
schedule May 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad u updated. Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule May 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!! You're alive! I was beginning to think this story was abandoned. Which would be a shame because it is really interesting. Like what is going to happen with that persistent salamander demon who could not take a hint? How will Inuyasha and Sesshomaru have something that is even remotely close to an acceptable relationship? Willall the political upheaval turn out ok in the end? What about this other Lord coming to knit pick Sesshomaru? I'm sure the whole mating thing will give him a lot of ammo. Will Inuyasha get to leave that room? Or will he have to break it down to get food? I look forward for more!
person Vyper
schedule May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I so love this story! I am so glad you added a new chapter! I have been waiting a long time for this.
person sei
schedule May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lovely.

I have been waiting for an update of this story for a while now. I just love the many possibilities that you can make in this story.

I look forward to reading what will happen to Inuyasha after the way Sesshoumaru treated him. I hope his youkai will be a bit more aghast with the way he was treated and if possible he'll make a way for Sesshoumaru to work for the trust and love of Inuyasha.

I look forward to reading more and hopefully in the near future.

Have a good day!
schedule May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Heads are going to "Roll" after Sesshy finds the room that Inu and Shippo are in.....Can't wait for the next chappy.....PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
nice story

but i think throug all you make it far too easy for Sessomaru
Make him work harder.
I am not one for the ending of pregnacy, but I am unable to accept Inuyashas behavior because of it.
Sess has done so much soo cruel things, he don't deserve Inuyasha or a pup.

In my opinion the least you can do is:
A) find a way to make sess suffer (Inuyasha flees with the pup and Ses must show his worth to Inuyasha)or
b) find a way on which Inuyasha wikl be MORE! powerfull than Sess (-> Sess cannot be with Inu if Inu isn't allowing this, because if he tries to go against Inuyashas wish Inuyasha can rip him appart, or burn him to ash... )

Quinn
schedule May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how Sesshoumaru will react to his mate being locked up in a storage room. If he was at least a decent mate he would be outraged. Inuyasha will definitely not be warming up to him any time soon. Sesshoumaru has his work cut out for him, and because he's been such a bastard I hope he struggles.
schedule May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you added another chapter! I'm still angry at Sesshomaru for ditching Inuyasha for more than a day. I wonder if he's still locked in that room...I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!