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Awesome chapter! I'm not bothered by Shippo seeing those two, you explained why he would be fine with that very well. Actually, I loved this chapter because Shippo is one of my least favorite characters, and somehow you've managed to make him adorable. Well done! ^_^ I also love the POV omniscience between Sess and Inu, how their thoughts about each other are so different and usually completely wrong about each other. It makes it so interesting to read. And I love love love how you write Sesshomaru. He's spot on in my view. We all know he has a soft spot in their somewhere, and you show that with his thoughts. Awesome :D

At least Sesshoumaru has healed Inuyasha. Poor boy is so frustrated and afraid that he doesn't know what to do anymore. I wanted to pound Sesshoumaru for being so mean to his little brother. He hopefully will notice how beautiful Inuyasha really is.
I've been waiting for this update forever and it is definately worth the wait, but I hope I don't have to wait as long for the next chapter. I truly love this story.

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Great chapter. Poor Inuyasha mated to a mean Sesshoumaru. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I didn't think anything weird or bad about Shippou witnessing it, except what Shippou was going to think of Inuyasha for not fighting Sesshoumaru off, but then you covered that base too by explaining that Shippou could sense the reaction in Inuyasha and understood how and why he was submitting. Especially considering that Shippou is technically a fox, and we're dealing with canine youkai in general, I definitely didn't take offense at the notion of him witnessing it or the remembrance of having witnessed his parents in the past. Can't say I blame you for the author's note about it, though, just in case. I'm sure some more closed-minded, conservative people probably would indeed have issue with that detail, but then...what would any of them be doing reading this story in the first place? ;-) Speaking of, excellent story so far. Looking forward to seeing what happens next! Will Sesshoumaru ever realize that Inuyasha was just as much a slave to his instincts as he was, and that it wasn't really 'the hanyou's' fault? Update soon!

I really liked this chapter you kept it pretty close to how Sessh would act and even how Inuyasha would act in such a situation as this. Although I really want to beat the crap out of Sessh for what he's done to poor sweet little Inuyasha I think despite how rough Sessh's youki is that I like his Youki alot more than his other part at least he sees how wonderful Inuyasha is and isn't blind and a brat. Can't wait to see what happens next I sure am looking forward to it. Also could you kind of let me know when the next chapter comes my email is brzachman@yahoo.com.

Please write more. I want to know if Sessy will be a good mate in the end. I know it is good to be hard for Inu in the beginning.

Ok I have read this chapter again and it is driving me nuts! I need a second chapter and soon. I've got to know what happens with Inuyasha. How can Sesshoumaru sit there and blame the poor boy when he was the one going nuts on him? Sometimes Sesshoumaru can be such an ass. Anyway please update soon!

Poor Inuyasha. It wasn't his fault his brother went ape shit and practically raped his ass. I hope Sesshoumaru doesn't hurt him too much.

WOW. This is amazing! Not only is it extremely entertaining [and not to mention very very hot] but it is so well written. The sentences are so natural and flow so nicely. The characters are believable. The plot is so intriguing. There's so much you could do with this story I can't wait to see where it goes! ^_^

Please write more soon, I am so excited to find such good writing and such a promising story on this site.