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for Miko no Makimono

by cakeiton

person lara5170
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would do anything if you would update this story. It is so intense and exciting but I want and need more....PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE
person lara5170
schedule August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god...this is bizarre & I can't wait for the next chapter. I think I'm going to scream
person Vyper
schedule August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I also don't get why Kagome hates Inuyasha. There really is no reason for it. Poor hanyou boy.
schedule August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story is incredible, by the way. I love it. Hope you update soon /o/
person Vyper
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So Inuyasha has a kid. Well he hasn't been a good Daddy has he? Leaving bastard children all over the place probably with his good looks. He and Sesshoumaru are definately male sluts.
person Vyper
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Inuyasha is in for the shock of his life. I was kind of hoping this would be a Inuyasha/Kagome fic cause I love those, but this has been interesting so far.
person lara5170
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Since this is in the Sessh/Kag section & I've read your work on the Sessh/Kag site,I won't ask if Sessh will be showing up or if he'll end up with Kags I'm just looking forward to it.I don't know(in this story)if she stayed,was sent back automatically,
I'm looking forward to the questions asked in ch.1-Why does my power feel cold to me?,Shouldn’t it envelope me,not chill me?,
(these 2 questions,I keep rereading them,I don't know what she means)Can spiritual powers protect themselves?(is she asking,if HER spritual powers,can attack a threat to HER?when she's unaware she's in danger or,what?)Can they fight with the threat of disappearing?(fight the threat of disappearing??)
Why did my body fight against Inuyasha?(I guess,her powers went off on Inu & she didn't know why? I,ask because,I picture her body fighting him,punching him & she can't control her fists,it seemed silly,so,I'm guessing it was her powers?)
Was waiting that terrible,you had to run off with another,Inuyasha?(she caught or saw Inu cheating on her?)
person lara5170
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't thank you enough for your little note & for writing here. I'm sure you are still writing on Dokuga. I just wish there was a way to email updates here. I'll be checking though.I really love this story & I can't wait to read more. Thank you.
person lara5170
schedule July 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this,I love this,I love this............I always love your work. I hope you don't mind this but,my email is lara5170@yahoo.com & if you write on other sites or have a second to send quick msg when you update,I would be grateful.If you can't then,that's completely fine & please don't worry about it.I didn't mean to leave my email to make you feel pressured,I just wanted to throw it out there for you as this site didn't have a PM or msg sending info for you. Thank you again & I hope you don't mind that I leave reviews here for every chapter.
person Vyper
schedule July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far and I hope you have more chapters coming. I am not much of a Sesshoumaru/Kagome fan, but this is good so far. I think it is kind of cute that Inuyasha's hugging Sesshoumaru.