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by cakeiton

person Vyper
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Kagome is trying to ruin the moment damn her! It is obvious that she isn't worthless to the diayouki if he is fondling her! Sometimes that girl needs to just shut her mouth!
person Vyper
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Don't you love men with claws and fangs? I do. If it were only me in this situation, I would let him take care of me in more ways then one.
person Vyper
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok now he has his arms wrapped around her. Now the kissing is supposed to begin. Gods I'm impatient.
person Vyper
schedule June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Blabbing about getting Sesshoumaru naked huh.......well that is nothing to be ashamed about. Hopefully her innocence will be gone soon. Carmel eyes, I would think more along the lines of molten gold, but carmel works.
person Vyper
schedule June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh what pleasures await in those eyes of his. Kagome is tempting fate by being so aloof, she needs to gather up the courage and just tell him she wants his body damnit! These chapters are such a tease. He is staring at her breasts after all!
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was fabulous.

Still grinning,
Fate
person Vyper
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I call them love scratches. What I wouldn't give to have some of those from him.
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
dang that was hella funny! love it<3
person Vyper
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That's funny that she fell over her shoe. Poor thing......not. I don't feel slightly sorry for her since she has Sesshoumaru and he is willing and able to give her intense pleasure. What girl wouldn't want that?
person Vyper
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oooo.....so Kagome gave Sesshoumaru a lap dance. How kinky of her. No wonder Sesshoumaru wanted her to dance in the other chapter. Hopefully he won't let her get away before they get it on.