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for Kagome's Worst Day

by darkangel1212

schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
:o..... i would have been on shessy like white on rice!
schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hope Kagome beats jaken when she finds him with that thong.
schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
those internal arguments are too funny!!
schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work!
schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Also idk what someone said too you, but I'm enjoying this story so far so tell the flamers to kiss your but and keep writing!!!
person lara5170
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
If you are writing FF & it's your 1st time,I say-if people flame you...screw the flames,as soon as you start to read a review & it's someone whithout anything helpful & they just want to say what they think is wrong, just stop reading anything negative quick!!! If they don't like it,they don't have to read it& if you put alter the name & repost it even a day later, the same people that flamed you will be tell you to write more..It's your 1st time,this is how you learn & teach yourself,if it's in your head get it out & just let it flow,don't worry about the things you can change at another time or after you get it out.I say get it out while you can. write what you think & feel get as much out as you can.Sorry if my review is not perect spelling & grammar today but I just wanted to say, I want to read more of this story.