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May 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
id like an update on this story if possible because I have enjoyed I so much id like to keep reading and see were the story may end lol but thank you for writing it and giving me something to read when I became very bored with other story's I was reading weren't as on edged as this one it kept me on my topes if you will but I will keep my eyes out for this update in my email
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April 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! An update! Here I was losing my hope in one of my favourite stories ever continuing, and yet you delivered! Thank You so much. By the way, I absolutely adore Suzu, he's such an impossible flirt. I'd very much like to read how You deal with the rest of this story, because there are some very intriguing plot twists here.
Cheers!
Cheers!
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April 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
awesome story..... it is hard to find a story that can keep my attention but this one really kept it.... i was on the edge of my seat with what has happening to poor InuYasha..... please hurry and update as soon as you can and i would like to be added to the email list for this story..... my email address is cherryblossomlover24@hotmail.com.... once again a very awesome story
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March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more
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March 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome explaination of what triggers InuYasha's demon! The necklace being the catalast in making InuYasha'a demon more dangerous, that was an excellent idea. Kagome...I so can't wait for them to get rid of her silly ass! What makes her think that those damn lepard demons will keep there part of the bargain. She's dumber than dirt! And, Kouga is just a fool! She's making such a fool of him, it's a shame.
Excellent chapter! It was well worth the wait! Thanks!
B reading U!
Excellent chapter! It was well worth the wait! Thanks!
B reading U!
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February 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!! I want Sesshy to kill someone, not Kags poor stupid girly is a pawn.
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February 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
First, I would like to say that I am glad you are feeling much better. Second... Don't question my sanity! lol. Granted if you are questioning it, that just proves how much I love your story. And fine.. *huffs and hands back Suzu* I'm stealing him back at the end of the chapter.
Now for the chapter:
I read Suzu... and his assets making up for lost time... and then... wait... Shippo?!?!?! I see. It seems like I will have to employ different tactics now. *rubs hands together evilly and then coughs* I like that Shippo is maturing as many stories don't have him maturing so much. I know it will take time for him to truly come into himself, but at least Rin has been quite helpful in that regard for the meal at the beginning though I am pretty sure Suzu's flirting did not help. I'd call on Suzu if I needed him quite happily I may add but I am pretty sure based on all my previous reviews that you know that. LOL.. stop questioning my sanity. I will admit it is a bit surprising if you put them together but not a bad thing. I am used to people putting Shippo with Rin and so I am interested in what you do with that. You will also have a long review when the first Suzu lemon comes up as well. >.> He is such an addictive character I'm almost sad to say I like him better than the canon characters you are using.
Kagome really needs to be dealt with. I would hate for her to cause Inuyasha anymore problems. Maybe Shippo should kill her. I know. I know. I can't just kill off people I don't like. *pouts* Still, I feel as though it would be something more final and satisfying in a way. Inuyasha could kill her, but I think either him or Kouga would have so much guilt for allowing her to get as bad and not noticing when she changed. Based on Inuyasha in the story thus far, I think it would break him even as he becomes stronger mentally. He's been through so much and that might push him past the point he should be at because of how long they've known each other. It is like a child, in a sense, killing his mother because he didn't go to get his mother the help he needed or a person upset for not helping their friend before committing suicide. It might be better for him to heal if someone else does end up killing her and he just needs to grieve for her loss instead of having her blood on his hands. When it comes to Kouga, I think he will feel heartbroken and not lead his own pack as well if he kills her. He would be correcting a mistake he made in trusting her but as he seems quite in love with her, I think it would break him more and I'm not sure who you could have put back Kouga's pieces because Rin would be odd and definitely different based on what I read at least which isn't many Kouga/Rin stories.
I think another way should be for Inuyasha to break free of it. Perhaps Kagome's untimely death could free him or something because she probably isn't going to take those beads off without a lot of persuasion and I think it would continue to break down Inuyasha's progress towards getting better. It would be a definite setback with him at this point. He was doing so well with Sesshomaru but it is understandable that he would shrink away. Many victims of such abuse have set backs when it comes to intimacy.
Dammit... Kagome freed the tongueless little *goes on a rant filled with explicatives*. I really hope they find and kill them. Kagome is making me hate her more and more. Seriously... just... OH! Maybe she could attack Suzu and Shippo kills her before she can hurt the sexy little peacock demon. He can just rip her to shreds and explain to Inuyasha why though I am sure Inuyasha might understand if she had actually hurt Suzu and they could explain it as Shippo protecting a submissive he wanted or something like that. Just you know.. 'off with her head'. Now Lady Kumiko, Inuyasha should kill but after killing her husband.
Michio should continue laying low for now as Kagome is a more immediate threat.
I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! And until then... *sneaks away with Suzu tied up in a bag* :)
Now for the chapter:
I read Suzu... and his assets making up for lost time... and then... wait... Shippo?!?!?! I see. It seems like I will have to employ different tactics now. *rubs hands together evilly and then coughs* I like that Shippo is maturing as many stories don't have him maturing so much. I know it will take time for him to truly come into himself, but at least Rin has been quite helpful in that regard for the meal at the beginning though I am pretty sure Suzu's flirting did not help. I'd call on Suzu if I needed him quite happily I may add but I am pretty sure based on all my previous reviews that you know that. LOL.. stop questioning my sanity. I will admit it is a bit surprising if you put them together but not a bad thing. I am used to people putting Shippo with Rin and so I am interested in what you do with that. You will also have a long review when the first Suzu lemon comes up as well. >.> He is such an addictive character I'm almost sad to say I like him better than the canon characters you are using.
Kagome really needs to be dealt with. I would hate for her to cause Inuyasha anymore problems. Maybe Shippo should kill her. I know. I know. I can't just kill off people I don't like. *pouts* Still, I feel as though it would be something more final and satisfying in a way. Inuyasha could kill her, but I think either him or Kouga would have so much guilt for allowing her to get as bad and not noticing when she changed. Based on Inuyasha in the story thus far, I think it would break him even as he becomes stronger mentally. He's been through so much and that might push him past the point he should be at because of how long they've known each other. It is like a child, in a sense, killing his mother because he didn't go to get his mother the help he needed or a person upset for not helping their friend before committing suicide. It might be better for him to heal if someone else does end up killing her and he just needs to grieve for her loss instead of having her blood on his hands. When it comes to Kouga, I think he will feel heartbroken and not lead his own pack as well if he kills her. He would be correcting a mistake he made in trusting her but as he seems quite in love with her, I think it would break him more and I'm not sure who you could have put back Kouga's pieces because Rin would be odd and definitely different based on what I read at least which isn't many Kouga/Rin stories.
I think another way should be for Inuyasha to break free of it. Perhaps Kagome's untimely death could free him or something because she probably isn't going to take those beads off without a lot of persuasion and I think it would continue to break down Inuyasha's progress towards getting better. It would be a definite setback with him at this point. He was doing so well with Sesshomaru but it is understandable that he would shrink away. Many victims of such abuse have set backs when it comes to intimacy.
Dammit... Kagome freed the tongueless little *goes on a rant filled with explicatives*. I really hope they find and kill them. Kagome is making me hate her more and more. Seriously... just... OH! Maybe she could attack Suzu and Shippo kills her before she can hurt the sexy little peacock demon. He can just rip her to shreds and explain to Inuyasha why though I am sure Inuyasha might understand if she had actually hurt Suzu and they could explain it as Shippo protecting a submissive he wanted or something like that. Just you know.. 'off with her head'. Now Lady Kumiko, Inuyasha should kill but after killing her husband.
Michio should continue laying low for now as Kagome is a more immediate threat.
I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! And until then... *sneaks away with Suzu tied up in a bag* :)
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February 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am glad to see you keep on writing the story. So far I like it very much and I'd love to read more.
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February 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely LOVED your story! It was beautiful and exciting. They really do belong together, and from everything Sesshomaru said at the end, it sounds like he does love Inuyasha. He just doesn't realize it. It was an amazing story and I love Sesshy/Yashy pairings. I would like to see how things progressed beyond the end, but at least it didn't just cut off out of nowhere. (a lot of fanfics do) Very well done and keep writing!
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February 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!