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for A Heat to Overcome

by Sparrowhawk

person Lola
schedule August 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story and I love how inuyasha's relationship with his brother gets better and better. Kagome is pissing me off in this story and to be honest she can die. Please come back with an update soon, I want to read more ASAP!
person SoulMore
schedule August 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
FAN!~
person Britney N
schedule August 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. Loooooovvveee what has happened to the story thus far. Please contiNue
person bibbiesparks
schedule July 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
May I please be add to your email list thank you. Here is my email bibbiesparks@yahoo.com
person omen
schedule July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh my god I love the story so far I can't wait to you update a new chapter so please put me on your email list and I will forever stay the devoted fan!!!!
person solitare1
schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love your story. Would love to know when you update. Seems like not very may are finishing their story on this site. I don't have anything to anymore and that depresses me to no end.
person Kaybop88
schedule July 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading this story, I look forward to reading more so please update soon and keep up the good work <3 :)
person Kit-kit
schedule July 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter.
person AidaLily
schedule July 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back. Suzu and I are just enjoying our nice wonderful time together until you need him again.

Chapter 24 - The Bad: There was no Suzu. *sniffles*
Now the review lol: I was worried about Inuyasha being able to handle a spar. While he has been improving I thought he was going to run scared of that eagle youkai for fear that he'd be like the slavers. Admittedly, I didn't think he would almost kill him but his trust in Sesshomaru is beautiful and I love seeing those moments between them. I think that it is definitely helping his healing process and would like to see him breaking a bit further out of his shell perhaps with something huge that makes him have to think out of it.

Chapter 25 - There were some hints of Suzu! Woohoo! Lol. I think I have problems now. *looks around* No. Just joking. *puts on a Suzu fangirl shirt*
Now the review: Dammit Sesshomaru. I like that they are starting to get better, but with the beginning of the chapter and his anger and Inuyasha willing making himself look and be so submissive even in front of just the generals and the other's pack is just sad and I know the chapter is going to get worse. Though Inuyasha punching and yelling at him was hilarious. I agree with Suzu's reaction. As for what happened to Inuyasha... oh my gosh. I hope no one overheard that and I swear is Kagome doesn't take the damn hint already. lol. I hope Sesshomaru actually claims him this time as a mate and hopefully then everyone else will leave him alone. They belong together. And the possible UKE Sesshomaru?!?!?! If it wasn't for the fact my heart belongs to Suzu, I think I could love you. lol. Ok. Now you may question my sanity. :P I just love Sesshomaru submitting. On the other hand, I do think that Inuyasha getting that all out and fully breaking down will be helpful for him. He bottled so much of it up for so long that once he gets over the worries of his heat, he will remember what he said and maybe moved past that.

Now I am off to have random drinks with Suzu again. *drags him off with me*
person SoulMore
schedule June 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
FAN!~