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The last chapter was really good! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Yay! You posted this because you missed me. lol. Suzu and I are doing just fine. When I am not secretly drugging his drinks to make him forget he has somewhere to be, I am pretending to be a mad scientist making vampire bat demon who loves the moonlight. Then this demon is going to come and sweep Suzu's sexy ass right off his feet. *nods sagely* That demon will be me... with male parts and then I won't have to give him back ever! *evil laughs before calming and looking like an innocent angel* Or maybe I will stay a girl... hmm... can't really tell what he likes with some of those forgetful drugs I give him from time to time. *smiles*

Sorry to hear that you have a cold. I've had a stubborn cold for the last few days and so I know how you feel. I agree that uke Sesshomaru should be done right. Some characters I just love to see uke like Sesshomaru and other characters like Kouga, I can't see as bottoms.

Now for the chapter, I think that Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's relationship has progressed quite nicely over the span of the story thus far. I love the amount of growth Inuyasha continues to show from knowing when to appeal to Sesshomaru's instincts and when to accept his guidance. Basically, I am loving that Inuyasha seems to be learning the delicate art of picking and choosing his battles. I do like that he is allowing Sesshomaru closer to him and that Sesshomaru is understanding and patient because of what had happened. One of the points I loved about this chapter would be how Inuyasha breached the issue of Kagome and how he hadn't wanted to distress the other with her words and comments. I love that when Sesshomaru mentioned his suspicions and what was wrong, Inuyasha took the time to fully think about the situation instead of flying off the handle. It definitely shows a bit of that mature hanyou we saw when he had ripped out Lady Botanmaru's tongue and handled the potentially dangerous situation with as clear a head as possible.

The heat scene was sweet, but admittedly I was kind of amused when Sesshomaru talked about how long it was taking and how sore he was. I have no idea why. I guess I just imagine Sesshomaru sitting there thinking 'Again Inuyasha? At this rate my dick is going to fall off.' or something to that effect. I like how the heat wasn't just going to be Inuyasha submitting but also a healing point for him since he had finally been able to think of Sesshomaru and not of those awful slavers. The morning after I think was definitely good for them as well.

Sesshomaru is definitely adapting more to helping Inuyasha and noticing Inuyasha's moods or thoughts without the hanyou having to voice something too embarrassing. In the same way as I mentioned above, Inuyasha is coming to terms with Sesshomaru and Sesshomaru's nature.

I am truly interested in reading the update, but you will most likely get another long review of me *coughs* borrowing Suzu *coughs*. A 'Suzu fangirl' shirt would be awesome! :) I should totally figure out how to make one. I would agree that you don't need permission and have no room to talk. Lol. We spend at least a paragraph going back and forth about stealing, borrowing, etc. a fictional character in your head. I think it qualifies us both as insane to normal people. :P Oh well. *grins*

i can't wait until the next chapter i swore if i didn't have to got o school the next day i would have just stayed up all night to finish reading it!!~ =D

lol 10th time reading~God help me. I really have to stop reading or I won't be able do my school works lol. I read your reply for my review and I gotta say, I understand totally what you are saying. I'm just impatient to read the aggressive parts. :P If I may make a suggestion, I think there's definitely ways for Sesshoumaru to be able to show a bit of his aggression now. (not really sure whether it counts as aggression or just protectiveness or something. never good with understanding feelings myself...) Such as maybe you can use Kagome as the fuse. *evil laugh* Using her to make Inuyasha upset and making him degrading himself. If I remember right, (and I'm sure I do) when Inuyasha first got his guards and meeting his friends again, Sesshoumaru mentions spanking. lol it will definitely be funny if he punish Inuyasha for degrading himself. I think it may also helps push Inuyasha closer to his recovery. Oh I'm sorry! I shouldn't put ideas in you since you are the author. I really should stop imaging...Anyway, thanks for the fast update! I can't wait till another chapter!

What can I say, another perfect chapter. I love how inuyasha won't let the black dog ruin his chance for happiness. Sees is gonna have to do something about old kags and soon I think.

Awesome chapter. Glad the heat went well. Love to see what happens next

I absolutely love this story and have re-read most of it at least twice. Please, a thousand times please, let Inu-chan heal! This is one of the few stories where it is actually hard for me to watch him be in so much pain. I'd also love it if there was a way to save Kagome, although I'd fully understand if she gets axed in the end. ^w^ I'm still more than a little put out by how she put that damn necklace back on as a "reward" in the third movie. No matter how you dress up a collar, it's still a collar, and I think she's earned a little bit of suffering for that. However, Kouga-kun would probably be extremely depressed, and that'd suck, because he really would be a whiny wolf.

<.< I also wouldn't complain if the birth control were to fail. :p After all, the modern stuff only has a 99% chance at working, which makes me slightly dubious about the feudal version (no offense to Tamae-sama), and the Inukai brothers have always beaten the odds, sometimes just in the spirit of being a contrary ass. I think Sesshy-kun would need the ego boost of being that ridiculously potent after how thoroughly crushed he was at having Inu-chan reveal the extent of his torment, and a puppy, or three, would definitely keep the whole cast of characters busy if they are anything like their parents. Add to that the fact that it would presents a lot of options: he could become a friggin' Mary-Sue-of-a-mother, who completely destroys the world as we know it and recreates it as a safe place for his children, this could be the straw that broke the camel's back, rendering him insane, or any other set of options in between. There's also a lot of wicked fun that could be had with the myriad of pregnancy related havoc a certain hanyou could wreak on the unsuspecting masses, ranging from cravings, mood swings, preeclampsia, morning sickness, post-pardom psychosis, and many other things to make life deliciously interesting, with the Western Lord having an Inu-slave trader in the dungeon to use as a stress ball. Seriously though, if you do make him become pregnant, please, take this as my last request and make Sesshy-kun pass out in a public place when them Mpreg version of Inu-chan's water breaking happens. That would be a priceless moment, particularly if he wakes due to Suzu's laughter and is continually shamed by the moment whenever opportunity knocks. XD I would be so ridiculously happy if you wrote that in, particularly if he and Kagome had a similar reaction to that when they find out that Inu-chan's pregnant.

This is an amazing story and I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!

I love it! Can't wait till next chapter! Sure hope that Sango and Miroku will turn against the miko when they found what she says to Inuyasha. It will be interesting, lol, don't you think? And it will be even more funny if Inuyasha got pupped during the heat by Sesshoumaru. I like how you write, but sure hope to see more aggression from Sesshoumaru towards Inuyasha. Too bad that he's not like that Suzu and Fuyuki kid that they get off on pain and control from their partner. Though, is there a chance that you could make it that Inuyasha wants some aggressiveness during the action? Lol, it will be funny. But I'm fine with anything as long as you make Kagome suffers~

p.s. this is my 7th time reading it and I can't wait to read it again~that's how much I love what you wrote!

Yeah another update. That was very enlightening. now to the brothers that love each other the love making starts. I can't wait till the next up date.