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I probably should say this but I'm gonna anyway!!! I read your story @Lyran in about 4-5 days... Went to bed late and was super tired for work the next day, but the next day I would do it again... Went like that until I got to chap 26 today and I was like "Wait... what? is done?" I love long chapters, long chaptered stories... so it made me very happy, and to top it off like a cherry on a Sunday...it was really well-written and enjoyed it immensely... 

Constructive criticism: I did struggle a bit with some sections... more than anything it was a fluidity issue more than grammar or sentence structure... I stilled enjoyed it immensely and I hope not just for the sake of the story (or stories if you have more than one going-haven't checked, but will after I'm done typing:)) that your health improves... I hope my review finds you well... It must be hard to have the muse and the want to other things, but not be able to do so due to your health... I hope you stay strong and that modern medicine is able to find you relieve, if not a cure or a solution of sorts for you to live a normal-ish life!!!

Best wishes,

MarCapuNava AKA Maritza

OMG.... this story gets better the more i read it.... please update so that i can see what happens next

I believe Hoshina means stars hoshi means star the Na means more than one I'm not positive tho

Lookingfoward to the nxt chap,

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Please continue this story please I am dying for an update ,third time I read the story love it

I really love this story! Please update soon.

Oh. My. Good. Sweet. LORD!!!
Emotionally charged doesn't even begin to describe what this chapter is. Lance through the heart was just so fitting a title for this! I'm in tears! For InuYasha to have survived such brutality, and still come out of it... pure! It's just so mind blowing.
Sesshomaru has his work cut out for him, but listening to InuYasha's confessions and getting a grasp of the terror in his heart is a start!
I'm glad Sesshomaru ordered Kagome to be checked. There is something seriously wrong with that girl. I'm just hoping that she won't be able to fool them.
This was awesome, I can't believe I've missed this and the next chapter of this story. It's just been so long since I was last on this site. On to the next chapter!

B reading U!

This one made me cry even more. It brought back memories of the most awful time of my life! And, how my husband, like Sesshomaru did for InuYasha, helped me through. The loving care that was displayed by Sesshomaru, in the way he spoke, washed, soothed, protected, and provided for InuYasha was a reminder of how my husband stuck by me through my illness. Sesshomaru was the very essence of what a good mate/husband should be and is!

Awesome chapter! I need to buy more Kleenex. Until the next chapter...

B reading U!

FIRST OF ALL....... DAMN!!! THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME!!!! I'll have you know that I spent two and half days awake to get to this last chapter. I would do the whole OH I'll just read to the end of this chapter and I'll put in my fav's and read it tomorrow you know.... BUT NOOOOO....I'd get to the end of one and think HOLY CRAP WHAT HAPPEND??? I must say hearing or at least reading how many slavers had their way with him and how they did was kinda like a car wreck you just couldn't stop looking reading I told myself you gone this far SUCK IT UP AND READ ON! I must also say I do not enjoy what happened but it was very cleansing in a way for both Inu Sessh and you and us for that matter and I truly enjoyed that! I love Suzu by the way! I cannot wait till he starts training the Inu and I wonder WHO will he truly be dominated in a good way by!!! OH YEAH AND BY THE WAY THAT WAS AWESOME TOO! The whole he dies to prove a point and Sessh revives him only to heal all he has lost YEAH I TRULY LOVED THAT TOO BY THE WAY!!!! I HOPE WHEN YOU GET A CHANCE YOU TELL US WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! OH and the whole Kagome thing yeah I can honestly respect how you've written her Most go over board defending her or bash her to hell and then some... YOU on the other hand have the right balance and I like that. I'm one of those who thinks she should have taken that damn thing off by now too... Anywho I can't wait till the next exciting chapter! THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS AWESOME STORY!