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Love it

omg i loved it!!! it made me cry. i was tearing up the entire time i was reading it. i couldn't stop.

This was very hard to read because of the improper use of line breaks and the total lack of commas.

I couldn't finish it because I couldn't stop crying! You made it so sad that I have tears running down my cheeks even as I type this! This story is something that I will have to read in parts because if I read it all at once I'm going to be crying all night and that won't help me finish my coursework. Please whatever you do, keep writing! You are so good at it and it is rare to find someone who can inspire so much emotion in such a short amount of time.

This made me cry so hard. It was amazing and it was so sad but very well written.

this was the Saddest thing I have ever read, before I even clicked on this story I was scrolling through sesshxkag things while listening to the song 'If I die young' so here I am, in my room, listening to the song, reading This story and bawling my eyes out.
my mom was so worried about me she was panicking then I made her read it and now we're holding each other and Still crying, this is just heart wrenching!, but its also very good and the song 'If I die young' is one of my favorite's, you did a really good job even if I was reading the last bit of it through blurry eyes with tears leaking off my face like a water fall

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. The story is incredible. Very well written. It even made me cry. :) Nicely done.