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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
now we will be getting somewhere.
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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hehe! This makes me wonder, if Sesshomaru is sharing these restrained Inu centric dreams now, does it relate to his centennial growth spurt? And, does that mean Inuyasha is experiencing symptoms of his own impending spurt? Either way, I wish I could put those two in a coma if those are the dreams they have, though I can't wait to see them become reality! Cause Inuyasha just doesn't get chained up by his aniki nearly enough in the anime :P Great work once again, I can't wait to read more!
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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love how Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are so in character in this story. Sesshoumaru is having some seriously erotic dreams about Inuyasha. I wonder if that is why he cuddled up to Inuyasha in the first place. I have a feeling this story is going to get hotter as you update. I look forward to your next chapter.
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April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lol damn I wanted Inuyasha to have some revenge :) pouts. Just started reading. Good story thanks.
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April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was a nice and funn one
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April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
First attempt at review didn't go through, so. I really love this story so far, I like the way you have their relationship evolving gradually, and very in character. I just don't see them as overly angsty and emotional, they're warriors, and you did a great job of showing their emotions and feelings while still keeping them the way they really are, excellent work!
And, the BDSM is phenomenal. Inuyasha's dreams are just incredibly erotic, and somehow very in character for him. He isn't the overly sensitive type, though he does seem eager to please and trust in those he becomes familiar with. At least to me, I see him being the way you have him portrayed, a strong, powerful beta, with a nice masochistic streak to boot. And I like that Sesshomaru seems to know more than he's letting on, with the off-handed humiliating comment, and putting his foot on Inuyasha when they were sparring. He did mention something like hearing Jaken talk in his sleep, perhaps he's heard Inu doing the same?
Great work on this, I can't wait to read more!
And, the BDSM is phenomenal. Inuyasha's dreams are just incredibly erotic, and somehow very in character for him. He isn't the overly sensitive type, though he does seem eager to please and trust in those he becomes familiar with. At least to me, I see him being the way you have him portrayed, a strong, powerful beta, with a nice masochistic streak to boot. And I like that Sesshomaru seems to know more than he's letting on, with the off-handed humiliating comment, and putting his foot on Inuyasha when they were sparring. He did mention something like hearing Jaken talk in his sleep, perhaps he's heard Inu doing the same?
Great work on this, I can't wait to read more!
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April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting and good story! I think it combines humor flawlessly with the complicated development of the relationship between InuYasha and Sesshomaru. The dream sequences are delicious. The frustration InuYasha feels is very present yet doesn't overwhelm the story. I like it a lot and I hope you will write more soon!
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April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the fact that Sesshoumaru is teasing Inuyasha and making him do stances. I am hoping that Sesshoumaru will give into temptation since Inuyasha is indeed in need of a good spanking and some great make up sex. I look forward to more chapters.
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April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the second chapter. It seems like Inuyasha isn't the only one who likes the battle and that erotic dream was pretty interesting. Perhaps Sesshoumaru will eventually endulge in some kinky stuff with his little brother.
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April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
will see how this go's