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I would love to beta for you. I'll send you an email asap. Just understand that it takes me around 48-72 hours to fully edit a piece, reflect on it, and make comments. I really liked this chapter. This was an amazingly delicious chapter! I like how you still have Sesshomaru still somewhat in character even while fucking Inuyasha's brains out. I love that you also have Inuyasha protest the idea of having Miroku join them. I reread the chapter 8 (the scene with the pirate Caspiana) and liked the changes you made to that scene. I still find it odd to think about a pirate in feudal times, and a piano, but hey, it makes it fun. I am very curious what you will have up next. Good luck with the next chapter!

I liked this chapter a lot. The sex scenes you write are absolutely delicious and kinky! I love them! The piano playing was a bit random but I found the discussion with Chrono and Lilly, where they talked about Sesshomaru only playing when he is happy or contented, added more to the idea. I like how Inuyasha is improving his abilities and proving everyone wrong. I really enjoy that. I am hoping this zombie thing doesn't get too bad. I love this story but it does have some very odd parts I never would expect, but that is what makes it endearing and even more enjoyable. I really like this story and I hope to read more soon!

The piano was awsome, but I loved the fight between Kouga and Inuyasha more. I think Kouga is so damn cute when he and Inuyasha are together.

glad your back before the end of the month. yes i like the changes to the las tone. it was getting very hot. the paino shot was nice but it nned to be more, or even the pretty woman movie. i'm sorry you freak out lilly a little to much. kouga is a waste of time or ordering him around lie a army man. update soon

Dam good story. Would you mind sending me an email when you update? I would review more chapters but, it is difficult to make out that captcha pain in the ass thing. it's not worth the headache of having someone help me with it. Do hope you change your mind & update regularly.

i hit the end and all i can think is 'no! there hast to be more!' i love it!!!! can't wait

I liked that Sesshoumaru had a closet full of fun toys for he and Inuyasha to share. I am also glad the brothers are getting along better. Perhaps this will be a start to a good relationship and prosperous future for the two of them.

I enjoyed this chapter! It makes a lot of sense, except for the pirate which seemed a bit random but it added a bit of silliness to this story. I like this story a lot and I do hope you will update it when you can. I found the bondage scene interesting and yummy. I like how Inuyasha has a full demon form. I know he isn't supposed to have one, but I like how it shocked Sesshomaru and it is awesome! Anyway, good luck with the next chapter!

The name of chapter 7 cracked me up. I enjoyed the chapter. Inuyasha should have known better than to go out there but does he ever listen...no! I found the sex scene interesting as well. I liked that. Inuyasha seems very confused but also angry, which promises to be entertaining. Please write more of this story when you get a chance!

it was a great flow. nice little changes.