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for Trapped miko between two inus

by Starprincesssnow

schedule April 11, 2018 at 12:00 AM

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY.....I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

person Zena McClain
schedule January 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I would like it if you would finish the story and if you need any help with ideas I'll be happy to help you. Just go to ZenaMcClain1997@gmail.com

schedule November 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the story. It was really good.
person Anon
schedule September 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good story
schedule July 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Please correct grammatical errors, it can make reading the story difficult
person anonymous
schedule November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would like inu embers with someone else and not with kagome or sessh, that trio is not good
schedule May 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's been said in the reviews before, but just to drive the point home: Please get a beta. It is clear that your writing does not show a full grasp of the language, and I believe the story could be a lot more enjoyable if you had an extra set of eyes to help you out.
person tsuki
schedule February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
the truth I'd rather have someone else inuyasha as kagome sesshumaru have a child, not just me with Inuyasha, he should go with someone else at least for dignity
person estelin
schedule February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this was amazing. cant wait for more
person Daphne
schedule February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love how the story is going so far. Hmmm... I wouldn't know whether or not to add in Sesshomaru's mother but may I suggest having Kouga pregnant and then having Ayame pregnant by Kouga??? Would be interestinf.....