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for Where He Belongs

by AikawaAkihiko

schedule May 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow perfectly written :) I loved every detail! Such a perfect angsty point to end it at. but I am still dieing for more of course ;) have to have that happy ending lol.
person jdbbrz27
schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome I loved their sweet wakeup episode. And someone really needs to kill that idiotic elder and all the small minded stupid wolves as well. Can't wait to see what happens next.
person KEdakumi
schedule May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oOOO... Cant wait to see where you take this. (Koga is gonna be pi**ed)
person Vyper
schedule May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel for poor Inuyasha. He is too sweet of a guy to be picked on this much. I hope Kouga treasures him when he gets his Inu back.
schedule May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it, can't wait for the next chapter.
person varjo
schedule May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh, those wolwes really don't know what they're headed for...
person Anon
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh so cute. Koga's kids are so good. 'Princess' and Rin would have had a ball talking about flowers...and finding ways to stick them in their demon protector's hair. Very nice
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay good story,

Interesting AN at the end of the last chapter... Why would Kouga see Inuyasha as a threat to his cubs where he would react by taking them away from him. They were always more of a friendly reivalry in the past and with how much they helped each other figured the pack saw Inuyasha as a powerful ally/unofficial pack member. As long as Inuyasha wasn't trying to claim the cub and take him from the pack (and considering he was trying to take the wolf cub to the pack so that they could take care of him thats damn unlikely) there would be no reason to react so negatively to Inuyasha taking care of the cub.
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Hope you update soon because I can't wait for the next Chapter!!

PS.
"The only hick-up to their blissful nights, cuddled in each other’s arms, was the night if the full moon. This last one, his human night had been rather painful."

I'm going to assume you meant to say the "new" moon here because that's when inu turns human, not on the full moon.
person Vyper
schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your last chapter. It is so hot! Kouga really is a good Alpha for Inuyasha and they are so much alike in personality. I almost always believed that Kouga and Inuyasha were more like brothers than Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. I like though that Kouga is planning on making Inuyasha his lover and perhaps mate.
I wonder though, although Sesshoumaru may not like his little brother I think he would have to be informed of Inuyasha's status with the wolves since whether anyone likes it or not they are brothers from the same Father. Sesshoumaru is a Lord and technically so is Inuyasha even if he doesn't want to be.
I doubt Sesshoumaru will care in some ways, but in others he wouldn't want his little brother embarassing the family by just mating with anyone and fact is he did say that Inuyasha was his to kill if he ever decided to kill his little brother. Sesshoumaru did change quite a bit towards Inuyasha in the end of the series, I just think he deserves a chance to say something about Inuyasha being family to wolves. Plus I think Sesshoumaru would be rather pissed off that a wolf is trying to harm his little brother when that is his job.