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No yasha! don't believe those assholes! Damn it! I'm really hoping koga finds him and fixes this soon. and someone needs to punch that elder in the face!

This is really good. Can't wait for the next update.

Yes by all means the fight scene was good except I wanted to kill those nasty stupid wolves myself especially when they lied to sweet little Inuyasha the creeps. I loved how Inuyasha helped the low life wolves out with the dragon meat though that is so typical of Inuyasha. Although someone oughta kill their leader he's an ass. 1/2 jerk 1/2 creep all ass. Sessh you got down to very typical of Inuyasha's jerk of a big brother but at least by the end of the anime he stopped being a creep whereby he was a full ass and now is just a jerk. I'm not sure if I told you this or not and I hope you don't mind but I nominated you at Inuyasha fan guild so if you don't want to be nominated please let me know and I'm sure they'll let me take it out but I would really like it if you could win. My e-mail is brzachman@yahoo.com you'll have to let me know really soon if you don't want to be involved in it. Can't wait for the next update.

This is a good story so far. I did notice one thing that's really bothering me. The Japanese word for Half-Demon is Hanyou, not Hanyo. I'm really not sure what Hanyo means though. Other than that I'm really loving your story and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I just thought I should point out that Inu Yasha's human night is the night of the new moon. Not the night of the full moon. The first episode that talks about his transformation is called The Mystery of the New Moon and the Black Haired InuYasha. I just thought I would point that out. In any case, I'm hooked on this story. I can't wait to find out why InuYasha's stomach keeps cramping up and why it hurts so much during his transformations. Not to mention the fact that I really want to know what happens with that Elder who's trying to run InuYasha off.

That was a great chapter with Sesshoumaru. I feel bad for Inuyasha since those bastard wolves lied to him. I hope Kouga can mend Inuyasha's broken heart and be a family to him.

I liked the fighting scene. I really can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh Sesshomaru makes an appearance!!! Awaiting the next chapter!! I want to see how Inuyasha and Koga get all the misunderstandings understood. (lol what bad word play on my part)! Anyway! Keep up the fantastic job!!!

It was perfect!!!! I love how Sesshomaru just waltzed in ended the fight and then left easy as that! but really making Inuyasha think it was Kouga thats just mean! hope Inuyasha figures it out soon along with Kouga!
loved it please update again soon!
Kit

i can´t help but wonder if they lied to inu - or if that elder lied to them. anyway, inu is hurt deeply and it will take a lot until he´ll trust kouga again....speaking of which, the alpha will be beyond pissed if he gets to know all this, that elder will pay with his life for his betrayal - killing inu would harm squirt too after all! that sess of all people saved inu is so typical, he´d rather bite off his remaining arm then admit it but i´m fairly sure he is kinda proud of how strong+persistent inu is, and its sort of flattering for him too - cause everyone who has trouble dealing with inu got to think 'if the halfblood is already that strong, how incredible powerful has the the full-blooded son got to be?' also, i like that inu helped the temporary exiled ones, bet at least the young one is his friend now, plus he´ll probably tell kouga about him.