rate_review Reviews

great chapter.

I don't want the Omega to die. How sad. I hope Koga can get his people to stop leaving too. What a mess!

OMG!!! Cliffhanger!!

I love this story, but I think if you ruined the cliffhanger. Had the section with Kouga and Inuyasha happened first, you would have lulled the reader into thinking you were focusing on just the pregnancy and their relationship. That section should have stopped before you revealed the cubs were kidnapped. The rising action would be much more dramatic.

Imagine ending it with "Tsunekuni was lost in his panic. He never noticed the warning, pleading look from Nakamasa. He never saw the glance exchanged between Tametoki and Genji. He missed completely when Genji bent over to pick up good palm sized rock from the ground. He was still standing, arms wrapped around the struggling cub and ranting hysterically when Genji ripped the cub from his grasp at the same time he brought the rock down in a crushing blow to Tsunekuni’s head." Now that's powerful!

I hope you take this critcism in the spirit it was given.

Ahhhhhh an update. I love this story. I can't wait to read more. And hopefully soon ^^

please tell me the omega (sorry cant remember name) isn't dead! he was so sweet!cant he just be out cold or something! dont let him die!!!!!!! anyways amazing chapter per usual, nice, evil cliffy and nice little sex scene thrown in there, well done. Cant wait to see how Inu and Kouga react to there cubs being stolen.
thanks for the update! and your spelling and whatnot were fine.

Kit

i hate the fact that you have not updated the story and i hope you do soon it's been three months since you have please do...
thanks u...

I never understood how having puppies would work for Inuyasha since he turned human once a month wouldn't that kill the baby?

oh im happy you updated this story i love it i love how kouga kickass for inu keep updating and ill be there to review and read

Omg... LOVED IT!!! Keep up the good work.