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Hey there,

first: thanks for the update. I was waiting for it. :)

Comment: Could you please stop to write all that swearing? I really hate that. Inuyasha isn't that kind of person, that allways swears and curses. He has manners and knows how to behave and to communicate on a normal basis.

It makes me sad, that your beautiful story becomes defaced so mutch just because of all the words like "fu***", "sh**" and so on. Would be better if you'd stop that. I read this kind of writing in several times before in other stories and didn't want to read those any further because of all that cursing. It just doesn't leave a good impression on the story.

Shelly

Ah I love this story more and more every time I read it ^.^ I'm a bit bummed that no threesome will be happening (gotta love the love-hate sex that those can have lol) but the story is still flowing nicely and I'm looking forward to more :)

I'm glad you are well and back to writing again. I've been checking almost everyday for an update on this story :D!

Yay! So glad you updated again! Sorry to hear you were really sick for a while there...but so glad you updated again! LOL. Okay, so Kouga sounds like he's pretty much, for the most part, the same guy. Even as he and Inuyasha kick each other's assess maybe that'll give Inuyasha some semblance of familiarity with which he can find a form of comfort, LOL. And I agree, he shouldn't feel guilty for accidentally hurting their feelings, yet if I were in his place I probably would too, for the same weird reason. Not so sure about Kouga, though, 'cause when would he have ever cared about hurting the other Kouga's feelings? LOL. I might start to feel guilty and then remind myself, wait, it's just Kouga. Not that I hate Kouga, mind you, he's a super fun character and I'm loving the way you're portraying him. And now that Inuyasha's so adamantly reiterated the fact that he's straight I'm really looking forward to seeing how the Inu/Sess relationship ends up developing. I imagine Sesshoumaru will eventually be teaching Inuyasha things he didn't know he didn't know, LOL. Reminds me of a bumper sticker I saw once that said "Straight? So is spaghetti until you heat it up" Whoo! So looking forward to the next chapter. :-)

I really like this story so far, it's pretty original. I love the way you write and that you're not rushing the story too much. Can't wait to see what happens next, please update soon!

i'm very excited to see how things move along, keep up the amazing work.

t

I feel for poor inuyasha :( So confused and lost. I can't wait for the plot to really begin then! Hopefully once it starts inuyasha can beat the sadness that has been pulling at him. Great writing!

I absolutely love this story it is definitely one of my faves! I find myself constantly checking back for a new chapter I am so addicted. ^.^ I especially love the fact that you kept the characters as their normal selves and that their attitudes aren't changed that much I can't wait for another chapter please keep updating :)

great story so far can't wait for more thanks for sharing =)

I feel sorry for both of them. It must be especially hard for Sesshoumaru since he loves his brother dearly and doesn't want to loose him again. Hopefully InuYasha will give him a chance.

Good they both listened to each others theory and explanations and everything^^
I wonder what will happen in the future. Maybe it would be good that InuYasha is being showed this 'other world', so that he feels more comfortable^^