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for Through The Well

by TheKaytla

schedule January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well...I think it's perfectly obvious what happened here. Kagome's destiny (our Kagome) was simply to return to her own time once the mission was over, and Inuyasha - unfortunately - was not destined to accompany her. That said, the gods did indeed take pity upon him and wanted to give him an opportunity to be happy. In this other parallel universe Inuyasha has died, and there's no bringing him back - likewise the Kagome of this universe is also dead, though that's really neither here nor there - and so this Sesshoumaru is also in need of a companion. Presto chango Sesshoumaru was given a present, our Inuyasha, and once our Inuyasha stops freaking out then maybe, just maybe, he can actually accept that he's in a better universe now and accept the happiness he's able to receive. I was suspecting that something might be up with the Goshinboku when you mentioned twice that he deliberately avoided looking at it, even before that reveal that he'd promised Kikyou on her deathbed that he'd protect the village, revealing that he had in fact never been pinned to the tree. I think once he sees that tree, and what I'm assuming by your buildup will be an unblemished surface, that that will be the proof he needs that he's not crazy, and neither is anyone else; he's really in a different world. Once he accepts that then he should also have the peace of mind in realizing that 'his' Kagome is safe and sound, having been deposited back to her family by him just as he remembers it. This is really great so far! I'm loving your idea and can't wait to see what happens next. Yes, I've read TwistedHilarity's story, but in hers there were two Mirokus, because the parallel one was still alive and well, and a bad guy to boot, so your take on the whole 'many worlds' theory is definitely different from hers. In her story they all realized that 'our' Miroku was from another world rather quickly, whereas in this story it might take them a while to accept that fact, even after Inuyasha realizes it, because they'll probably all just keep assuming his memories are screwed up. That ought to make for some entertaining moments! Looking forward to it!
person shaiidin
schedule January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Story is very good. I'm as confused as Inu is XD.
schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, tis is great! could you e-mail me when you update? grarr93@hotmail.ca
person pumpkinpi
schedule November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, its as if Inuyasha stepped into the warring states area version of the twilight zone!!! Great stuff look forward to more!!!
schedule November 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i'm excited for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work.
t
schedule November 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. What a confusing and yet amazingly interesting story! And are those hints at a threesome I see there lol? I am looking forward to more soon!!!
person Shelly
schedule November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Finally a new chapter! I was waiting for it! I looked every day on the page if you uploaded something.
Sad it's so short! But anyway: nice work!
I hope in the next chapter there will be more of Sesshoumaru und Kouga. Maybe they 'catch' InuYasha and take him with them? *giggle* They have some explaining to do anyway. And I believe this is best done alone and in private.

I really wonder how feelings should develop in InuYasha concerning Sesshoumaru and/or Kouga. I'm excited^^
Hope you won't make us wait too long for the next chapter!

See you!
person Vyper
schedule November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Inuyasha. This is so confusing for him and poor Sesshoumaru. It is obvious Sess loves Inuyasha. I hope things get figured out and soon.
person cheedoze
schedule November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, is Inuyasha in an alternate universe or something instead of just a time in the future? That's going to make things weird with Sesshoumaru for sure, he might not have any concept of why Inuyasha thinks they don't get along. Inuyasha versus squirrel was hilarious.
person pumpkinpi
schedule October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff so far, look forward to more!!!

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