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for Through The Well

by TheKaytla

person Shelly
schedule May 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey there,
jippie an update ^o^ *glad*
The scene with the tree seems to be very interesting. I was also thinking about a scene with the brothers, alone, talking. I just hope that InuYasha will be quite for some time and just listen. That is the only thing I hate in almost every fanfiction. People always write how ignorant InuYasha is and that he doesn't listen to a single word someone says, especially Sesshoumaru's words. That really makes me angry. He is not an idiot or something like that. Maybe he is a little unresting since he is young and had a bad time growing up, but he still knows how to behave and such!
So I really do hope that you won't write him like an ignorant stupid young adolescent!

I also do hope that InuYasha gets the chance of explaining detailed what happend in his oppinion, so that they will recognize finally what's going on.
Hopefully Kouga will have some more words with InuYasha too. There seems to be some kind of special relationship between him and Inu too.

MAybe for the future it would be nice to write about Sesshoumarus attempts to win over his little hanyou again, so that InuYasha valls in love with him and so on.^^

Wish you all the best
Shelly
person satterb
schedule May 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Gosh! I've been so busy that it's taken me a full 24 hours to get this chapter read. (I wanted to make sure I read it carefully, you put so much detail in that it's important not to miss a word) I love this story and I look forward to Inuyasha coming around (so to speak). I love fics with a caring and patient Sesshoumaru. I loved Inuyasha's reaction to tenatious little Rin. TeeHee! Your story is well planned and beautifully written. I look forward to more. Thanks for sharing your talent with all of us.
schedule May 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww...you're welcome! And thank you, that was sweet of you to say. I adore this story. I've always been partial to many worlds theory, or multiverse, or whatever you want to call it, and with the powers that be where the well is concerned being shrouded in mystery, why not? So let's recap...Inuyasha can't possibly just think he's missing memories, like there's a gap in time taken away from him, and likewise the others can't all keep thinking that as well. As far as both sides of the fence are concerned things have changed. The others just think his memories are warped, but enough altered memories will have to throw up a red flag, I'd say. And even though I loved it that he was willing to believe that he was the wrong one because everyone else was singing the same song, he's got to know he can't be that wrong. Too many things are just too off from what he knows. He was never sealed to the Goshinboku, the proof is in the pudding (You really hadn't done that build-up on purpose? Well it's brilliant either way!) Let's see...no such thing as the sword Toukijin, Kaede's got both eyes...I'm sure there are plenty of other oddities too once those two start talking and comparing notes, which I'm sure will happen because you just said yourself that questions will be answered so that the real plot can begin. Yay for the real plot beginning! But besides that I'm dying to see Inuyasha's face from Sesshoumaru stating that he wanted to apologize! LOL. But he needs to trust his instincts, that Goshinboku really isn't 'his' Goshinboku. Forgetting what happened after he dropped Kagome off supposedly for the last time is one thing, but he's got to realize his memories aren't that screwed up. Once those two start talking none of it'll be the same, I imagine, or at least not the important parts, like Sesshoumaru violently ripping the black pearl from his eye in an attempt to steal Tetsusaiga *sprinkles inspiration dust if you hadn't already thought of that manga arc* hehehehe. Whatever you decide to do I know it'll be awesome, so I hope that nasty migraine leaves you alone so that you can fully enjoy writing this story as much as I enjoy reading it! :-)
person SesshxInu fanz
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Am I the only one who wants Inuyasha to return to his own world? I want him to go back and other world Sesshy to follow him. It would be so interesting!
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I wasn't expecting another update so soon but this was awesome! So let's see...Inuyasha obviously isn't going to be able to get back into his world because that would mean end of story, so he'll either be lost in limbo again for a while and then be spat back out in this world, or - and probably more likely - the well is in fact dead again and no lights of time will engulf him at all. No Toukijin in this universe? Interesting... Part of me can't wait for the time when everyone realizes what has happened and the juicy Inu/Sess bits start - especially 'cause he'll probably still be way flustered about the whole thing, LOL - but in the mean time I'm finding his utter confusion utterly hilarious. Keep up the awesome work!
person chevenga
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Delightful, as always. I look forward to more, especially more of this intriguing new Sesshoumaru. Thanks!
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Goodness, I'm liking this story! The concept is so intriguing. Hope you update soon!
person Shelly
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaaaaaah don't go >.<
Stupid InuYasha... why doesn't he just sit down, shut up and listen? But Sesshoumaru is the same stupid. They should all just sit down and talk and see, that InuYasha has just come from a parallel universe.

Very nasty ending for this chapter! I hope the next one will come very much soon since I'm dying to know what will happen next!

Thanks ^o^
person neonfi
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating. I'm very much liking this story and would like to see more. Rofl, wonder when they will realize he's not only time traveling but going to alternate dimensions. bwahahahah, god gimme moooore. xD
person Angel_R
schedule April 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this story...can't wait to read more....