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for Come Home Puppy

by Namiriana

person Vyper
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It is too bad this story is over. I really liked it and there is so much information that is missing. Like will Kagome get through the well to try to destroy Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's relationship? What will Inuyasha's baby look like when he has one and what gender will the pup be? I just wish there were more.
schedule March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome
schedule March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Please correct your disclaimer


It does not contain one of the two required elements. Namely, the part in which you disclaim the fandom itself by NAME, not just the characters. It can be worded however you, the author, likes, provided that it is clear you are disclaiming the specific fandom, which thus INCLUDES characters, settings, and etc.


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person Vyper
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot, but I wonder if you couldn't separate the chapters a bit more. It just seemed long winded. Either way I hope you update soon since I look forward to reading more of your story.
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it was good. you had everything in this.