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Oh just to say I'm happy with the tone of this fic yes so many authors choose to same outlook and to a point where I feel that I'm reading the same plot line over and over again. Some how this feels real there's not a battle with swords or other youkai it's just the two of them dealing the modern world. It' just has a different vibe and one that I'm excited to read on. I have my favorite author and a few review to this but I can say that you are going up on my list to look out for and yes it's your fault I was late. that was rather naughty of me some many fic but sometimes there are some you can't wait to read and has to be done right then and there. lol

It almost seems that Inuyasha is dying a little bit every time he writes. It is good Sesshoumaru is around his little brother and I hope Inuyasha soon finds his big brother's companionship to be soothing.
It also seems that Sesshoumaru is falling in love with Inuyasha as he gets closer to his little brother. Perhaps Inuyasha feels this and is afraid to let his own feelings for Sesshoumaru show and that is why he wants to keep his elder brother away.
Anyway, I love this story and I hope to see another update soon.

hmm I liked the pace, but inu getting bitterer at the attentin has to be expalined. Sadder I can get - but bitter?? anyway looking forwrad to the explaination thanks for updating so well. SunHawk

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You are slowly breaking my heart! Great chapters and I look forward to more!

I wish Inuyasha wasn't being so stubborn with Sesshoumaru. Sesshoumaru is trying so hard to be there for his brother and Inuyasha keeps pushing him away. I hope that Inuyasha doesn't leave for long or that Sesshoumaru could go with him. I also wonder if there is a way to make Inuyasha live longer. Perhaps Sesshoumarau has a spell or something. I also hope that Sesshoumaru can get Inuyasha to eat more.
This almost seems like a dark fic with Inuyasha slowly dying. It really is a sad story so far although I do love it.

I just wanted to let you know that because of you I was late to work and I had to read Chapter 6 before I left or I would have had to wait 8 hours to read it. 2 I'm extreamly happy to come home to another chapter. What can I say you darn well know that I love this chapter!

You know I feel like you have this great gift for writing as well. The tone of your writing to explain Inuyasha's work of art through Sesshomaru eyes is just fantastic. It has me wishing I can stay up all night reading in which I have plenty experience in doing with a good book. Thank you for the 2 updates it really made my day to come home from work and be able to read this. I can't wait to read your updates and good luck with your math test.

I love the budding relationship that is developing between them and how could Sess not see himself in the story of the dancer and the deformed brother? I am really enjoying this and you are doing excellent. Can't wait for more!

Your story is lovely and touching and I thank you for writing it I hope that you finish it for it would be a shame to not finish such a beautiful beginning.