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I really like this story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I think Sesshoumaru is falling in love with Inuyasha. He says that he likes Inuyasha a lot, but I think there is more to it than that. Nice chapter by the way. I am looking forward to reading the next update.

I have to say your story is beautifully written, it tears at the soul and yet makes it whole again and again. Inuyasha is dying a bit every day so what will Sesshoumaru do once he is no longer there? Will he pick up where his little brother left off?
I like this line: “Because an existence without a proof is void of any life.”
Perhaps as pseudo writers we leave our mark on the world as well in a sense since we all know Inuyasha and the characters of the show belong to someone else. It is the idea that we own them temporarily that makes us do what we do.
I wonder about many different things sometimes and think about writing an original of my own with my own characters that I can claim as my own. However it is not as entertaining as using these beloved characters to live by our whims sometimes doing things that we ourselves cannot do for one reason or another.
Writing is so very personal and you make each piece your own no matter what the rules say.
I believe it is finally good to see Sesshoumaru drown in Inuyasha's emotions trying to hang onto him only to find himself lost in the abyss of love itself which he is trying to cope with by living in denial of his true feelings. It is just too bad that these emotions for his little brother couldn't have surfaced sooner.

Oh my goodness, I was not expecting a sexual scene so quickly, but man was that delicious. I enjoyed this chapter immensely and I hope to read more soon! I wonder how this will change their relationship? Will Sesshomaru insist on knowing what is going on in Inuyasha's body or will Inuyasha tell him openly or will they both avoid the subject? Will Sesshomaru be able to help Inuyasha with whatever is going on? I am really curious what will happen next! Please update soon!

ahhhh loved the last bit.. sweet. Throughly enjoyed the first bit - funny can see Inuyasha being not impressec by Sesshy's worry.

That was an awesome chapter! I really like how this story is turning out. Sesshomaru isn't a giggly little school girl but he isn't a cold bastard either. I also like how Inuyasha explained why he writes, because I know I've done something similar for myself. I love this story and I wish you luck with the next chapter. I will try to review as soon as I can, but I cannot guarantee that I will be able to review as often as I have been. I wonder what you will have them do in the next chapter.

we r almost there. i hope no one dies.

What a hot steamy chapter. Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha are finally making some serious progress in their relationship. I only hope that neither of them regret it since it would be nice for them both to love each other in some way even if it isn't just brotherly.
It also seems like Inuyasha has a new lease on life and that Sesshoumaru is filling that empty void of lonliness that Inuyasha has had most of his life. I think Sesshoumaru is equally as lonely as his little brother. It is apparent both brothers need one another.
I would like to see the two of them maybe writing a book together before Inuyasha eventually dies since he will die before Sesshoumaru. It could be even just a book about their new relationship.
Anyway, great chapter and I hope to read more as you update.

I love this story. Your style is elegant and beautiful. You make me ache for both Sesshomaru and Inuyasha. Thank you.

Hot, hot, hot.. wow that was good. Nice appertizer, waiting for the main course. I like the way you used the word 'enlaced' it kindda went with how fragile inuyasaha seemed. lol, poor sesshy, doesnt like himself as the bad guy in the book. hehehehe thanks fr the speedy update