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person KoiMiko
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
O.O love the new swords, they are really powerful. I was scared as well for a moment there for Kagome. Nice chapter!
person Vyper
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that Kagome forgave Inuyasha and trusts him now with a new sword. I just wonder what Sesshoumaru is going to do with tessaiga now that he has it after fighting for years to get it from Inuyasha.
person KoiMiko
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
sorry i have reviewed i haven't been to this site in a while. I got a lot of chapters to cover. I always thought Inuyasha and Kouga belonged together. The way they always fight and go on. I am glad to see inuyasha back to his normal self. I adored the fight scenes with Sesshoumaru,Bankotsu and the cage match, they were awesome. And the fight with Naraku you are really good at writing fight scenes. when Kagome grabbed Jaken and tossed him out the window i laughed like crazy. than she opened the window zapped him and closed it back, funny stuff.

Will Kagome have anymore dreams about things that will happen? Is Bankotsu just being so protective of Kagome because of the life debt? Will Kagome and Sesshoumaru mate before the fight with Naraku or after? Will the two be torn apart when the jewel is finally whole? Wow how long has Sesshoumaru cared for Kagome?
person Vyper
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, now Kagome has to die since she is touching my man. Sesshoumaru is mine damn it all. Bankotsu can be with Kagome. That I can live with, but Sessshoumaru is off limits.
Anyway, great chapter and I look forward to reading more.
person Vyper
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It will be interesting to see what happens when Sesshoumaru follows Kagome onto the other side of the well.
schedule March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. You made the character OOC but it your story, you could have Sess in a tutu if you wanted, because your the writer. I like the story they way you write it.WOOOHHOOO!!! Inuyasha is saved from his demon blood. I was wondering how or if you where going to do that.
person Vyper
schedule March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am glad Inuyasha is back to normal. That is good. I just wish Sesshoumaru could have saved Inuyasha and Kagome's friends with the tensaiga since it would be hard to live with the fact that Inuyasha killed their friends. I really feel for Inuyasha, poor guy really is just a sweety pea.
person KoiMiko
schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have read both verisons of your story and i like them. I love how your Kagome got stronger and more powerful. I also love how it hurts her to think about what happen but she isn't driven to taken her life or whimpering in the corner all the time. I hope you keep on writing and remember its your fic you are allowed to make any and all characters as OOC as you like. I'll be waiting on the next chapter ^_^
person Vyper
schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far, but I really feel for Inuyasha who wouldn't have hurt Kagome or their friends if it was not for his demon taking over. I hope that Kouga can help him.
schedule February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay first chap......loved it sooo on to the next one.