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March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
u have a great writing style and this is a very well thought out story. the only problem i have is the need u seem to want to TORTURE us. i checked this site for days, every day and several times, you were LATE. i believe that deserves another chapter NOW. :) i promise i will review again if u do or maybe give u a cookie
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March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious... when will Kagome become Sesshomaru's official mate? Will they have a big ceremony, or will it be a private affair?
I like that Sesshomaru is making amends with Kagome and treating her better. Kishi is looking like his mother's little protector. Can't wait to see what he will be like when he can converse with his mommy.
I like that Sesshomaru is making amends with Kagome and treating her better. Kishi is looking like his mother's little protector. Can't wait to see what he will be like when he can converse with his mommy.
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March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think your writing style is really good, it's clear and you get to the reader. If you were to publish something I think you would do really well. And about this chapter I really liked it, and could you make sessh to talk a little more, sometimes it feels like he doesn't like to be around his family.
Great work!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Great work!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like how Kishi turned into a big puppy. That is so cute. I also hope there will be some sexy scenes with Kagome and Sesshoumaru now that they are back home. I am also suprised that Sesshoumaru is ok with having a hanyou pup. I wonder how Kishi will react to having a little brother or sister hanyou eventually in this story.
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March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this story. my friend n i check 3-5 times a day 4 da new update lol so far im sad dat kagome lost her child n i waz upset dat u made her n sesshomaru thro that but i still like that story n im happy jaken got wat he desrve plz i beg u dont keepn us in suspense we're dyin 2 know wats next lol take care n keep up wit da awsome work love ya
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March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
what what what this was so short omg i crave for more!!!! I demand another update lol =P i look forward to your next update keep up the good work
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March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really hope things start looking up for Kagome. Please post another chapter I have read this one twice this week just to stave off the anticipation. LOL
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March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
update!!!!
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March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It is sad that Kagome lost the pup. Poor Sesshoumaru is trying so hard to be gentle with her too and stupid Jaken better get what he deserves for destroying the well.
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March 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was very good indeed, and I sure want to read how is sessh going to tell her the bad news. Great work