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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Over all I like it, but there are lots of mistakes, lots of repetitions and things that you should really edit to make the story more interesting and flow better. The incest is a little weird, and I wonder why you included it at all, but it's not the worst thing I've ever read. I can't wait to see the last chapter.
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May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good so keep up the good work! I also don`t support incest but it somehow works with this story so I`m okay with it. I find it interesting that you put in the inu youki trait that it is okay to sleep with your mother. I have never read about that trait in other fanficts so you are my first. This is a great story etheir way and I`m not going to stop just because all of a sudden there is incest. If anything it adds to the story so keep doing what your doing and I will keep reading. You go girl/guy! Keep it up!
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is getting good!! *dreamy sigh* You gotta love inu urges. :-P
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was a GREAT chapter! I had a feeling that Kishi would want to sleep with his mother after learning all of that, not I'm looking forward to see when the youngest gets to as well. I wonder if he will have better control or be very nervous. I hope you update soon.
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
was not expecting that.
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May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing i cant wait for more
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May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi. Well I must say I liked Kishi's emotional state, where he is vulnerable and needs comfort, although the way he sought it was "strange" But good job as always ;)
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May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations Dream Child has been nominated for Best Lemonfic for the 1st Quarter 2011 at Dokuga. You can find your nomination banner here: http://www.dokuga.com/images/awards/banners/14/112.jpg Good luck!
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May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. A little strange but good. Please update soon.
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April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awfully! Disgustingly! I delete you from the list of favourite authors!