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Oh please tell me there is a sequel to this???

ok with all this happening why didn't inuyasha smell sesshomaru on kagome? Will kagome find out that inuyasha is with kikyou? What was kagura doing when she left the camp? Who is the father going to be? What about miroku and sango will they be in the story? If the pup is sesshomaru's will he take care of the pup? What will inuyasha do if the pup isn't his?


update soon onegai


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please wright a sequel i really want to read it i think it would be very good

First of all how could Kagura being an incarnation of Naraku-born of the flesh he discarded after making his body strong as possible be mate material for sessh thats just disgusting cause even if Naraku is dead she'll still smell like him after being made from his body.... I would be very happy if Kagome caught Inuyasha cheating on her with Kikyo & Inu tells her he mated her to have pups & he tells her he figured it was okay since he was sure that kagome was fooling around with Sessh & Sessh found out that Kagura used a spell on him to trick him into rutting & marking her as mate that time & she came clean cause she brought up pups again & Sessh finally snapped & said he & his beast refuse to touch her again & he wanted her to tell him the truth before he kills her... after he hears this he decides to see Kagome who is getting out of the well after finding out she's pregnant & she's upset & he fly's them off & she tells him how after the one time with him that same night Inu pulled her out of her sleeping bag & in his 2 seconds he came in her & Sessh tells her it was probably because when Sessh was going to meet her that time he saw Inu who said something about Kagome to him & Sessh admitted that since he was throwing it into his face he thru in his face that he knew he was still screwing the dead & then took her to where Inu was screwing the dead & that was how Inu came clean & Kagome decided with Sessh not to tell Inu about the pups & see his healer so Kagome started seeing Sessh & left Inu & moved into the castle with Sessh since he thru Kagura out after finding out the truth & the healer told Kagome & Sessh that the pups appeared to be full blooded so the father couldn't be hanyou & that powerful mikos could birth pure pups or even stronger pure bred pups with Miko power & the pups were born pure blood & marked as Sessh's heir so it was obvious that they were his & had miko powers too & Kagome & Sessh very happily got mated severing their mate ties with Inu & Kagura...& Inu still wanting pups Mated Kagura but it turned out that since Kagura had been an incarnaion of Naraku she was unable to give birth & was as worthless a mate as Kikyo.....but Sessh & Kagome, their pups lived long happy lives & since Kagome mated a taiyoukai shared his lifespan & in their happy long life together had more pups a couple or so more times & the pups were all healthy & powerful & since Sessh & Kagome really loved each other Sessh was a great Mate,lover & father

hope you update this soon :D

That was cool. Kinda hits home for a lot of women though, staying in a unfulfilling relationship because of marriage, Look, now you made me go feel things... (Shake it off) Okay, I love the story idea. Could have used a bit more details for the surroundings, but I really like the interaction between the characters. Kinda curious of who the father is, but it's fun to end the story with questions like that. I think it's Sesshy's, cause his boys would beat up Inu's and totally win. lol. Thank You!