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by naqaashi

schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Technical note: looks like your formatting may have suffered from the RTE upgrade. DG set up a couple of FAQ's, depending on the issue:

http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php/topic/20135-how-to-fix-the-glitches-that-are-due-to-the-rte/

http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php/topic/19903-how-to-add-a-chapter/

Now on to the part you really want to read:

I absolutely loved how Kagome ... encouraged Sesshoumaru to perform. I was laughing hysterically at Technique 101.

And the yoga 'circle'? Now that is flexibility! And gives a new definition to "Solo".

You have a truly comical piece here. I love the humor in their interaction, and the snappy responses are extremely amusing. And I nearly died at the end. Mary indeed!

Thank you for sharing. I needed that laugh. I look forward to more works from you!