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Please correct your disclaimer

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Sigh. It's too much like the movie instead of just being based on it. Some of the dialogue is the same too. You are a good writter but it doesnt have enough originality. I only read the first 2 or 3 chapters but it just made me not feel like reading it anymore. Like I'm basing a story on something that already exists I cant keep different characters so OOC just so they fit with the story. The story should try to fit with them at least a little. Sorry and good luck. Keep writing you are a very good writer.