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for Alpha-Beta

by SplendentGoddess

schedule March 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

That was i thoroughly entertaining first chapter! I appreciated how you set the atmosphere in the begging. I also found Kagome's space\time paradox concerns hilarious.

schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very cool story. I almost didn't read this one. I really love your stories, and the reviews you leave others. I tend to read what you post on "The Return". You tend to give me more incites into the story :)
I love the pack dynamics and how you reconciled their alpha problem. It was very sweet how Inuyasha discovered his human ways of loving Kagome. Very sweet, great job
person Pink Fuzzy Elephant
schedule April 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very well written a lovely story
person wolfmoonsshadow
schedule July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I love the whole hierarchy, psychology. The whole relationship aspect of the characters is the best part!
schedule August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another one of my favorites here. You always put em in the best scenarios whilst simultaneously keeping them in character. Makes for sexy hotspring goodness. And the dominance/submission angle was a good bit of intro plot before the real fun started. And she gets no sympathy from me for calculus until she spends 3 hours with integrals solving work on a charged particle, but I digress...steamy sexspring=happy reading.
person Vyper
schedule December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is another wonderfully written story about Inuyasha and Kagome. Thank you.
schedule December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so well written and very realistic. I loved the whole story, it was very 'in character' and the alpha/beta idea is very believable. I am so glad it worked out well for them. Thank you for sharing.
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it I like it!!! XD