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person Sagura87
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome!!! loved every minute of the roast XD
schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG THIS WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD! I LAUGHED FOR HOURS!!!!
person ardentes
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is soo fucked up but damn it, I laughed so hard I choked a few times and my sides are screaming in agony! This is a seriously funny story, although it is quite odd. I think everyone got their digs in. I just had to laugh and I really enjoyed it, even if at parts I wanted to just pretend I hadn't read that! Oh man, now I'll have nightmares about Naraku raping himself. Seriously though, this was hilarious and I really enjoyed this story!
schedule December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, poor Inuyasha! They're all picking on him, but I guess that was supposed to happen. Very funny! The size of the chapters was kinda scary cause they're huge! It might have been a better idea to make it ten smaller chapters so it wouldn't scare the casual reader away. But over all, it's well written and very descriptive. Thank you!
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't want to appear rude, and please don't think this is a flame, as it was very well-written, but may I point out that Kagura is actually Naraku's SECOND incarnation. Kanna was his first. In both the manga and anime, Kanna is referred to as Kagura's elder sister at least twice.