rate_review Reviews

Wow, for three chapters this story was long. It took me two hours to read it, keeping in mind I read it very carefully cause I didn't want to miss a thing. I thought you had all of the characters personalities down perfect. I could really see them acting that way. I thought the love scene, and I say love becuase it felt like more then just a lemon, was very sweet and realistic. I am so happy every worked out so well for them, Inuyasha really needed a happy ending. And I'm glad Kikyou can to her senses. I kinda wish you put in another paragraph about the baby just for curiousity sake. I loved the story. Very sweet, full of emotion and well written. Thank you!