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for Attempt at the Tempest

by muchlovejessica

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schedule November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hopefuly you come back and finish this, because its great.
schedule May 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM

I like your premise, and I like the way you've introduced the element of Miroku and Sango. I think you've done well setting up the plot, and the tension between your characters. It would be interesting to see this tale continued, should you choose to return to it.

Thank you for sharing, and happy writing!