rate_review Reviews

So, while reading this story, I realized that not only have I read it before, but it had one of my favorite hot springs scenes! I have wanted to reread this story for the longest time and I couldn't find it (a problem I encounter quite frequently). I'm so glad I found it again, its even better my second time through, lol!

Very nicely written

Uhg...Kouga. The very name defiles this review, but still...a good read for those of us who enjoy seeing our favorite hanyou kick some ass and then get some soon after. A good day in the Sengoku Jidai.

you created the perfect oneshot!

Aww, poor Kouga, his over eagerness gave Kagome right to Inu. I like the twist to this one, it's very original. And, I wonder, now that Inu really has Kagome truly marked as his own and Kouga submitted, perhaps the wolf could be placed between them somehow? Or at least I think it would be a pretty cool idea to have Kag and Inu trade Kouga's shards for letting the wolf in on their activities in one form or another. Either way though, great work!

I kind of feel bad for Koga, but he is a pushy bastard although a very sexy pushy bastard. Once again it was a romantic story and very good. At some point you gotta write a whole story instead of all these oneshots as good as they are.