rate_review Reviews

I really really enjoyed this. But it felt like you could of separated the events into chapters, and made it into a full story. (Would be awesome if you did.)It has left me feeling and being cheeky and requesting a re-write into a full story. I think it would be interesting. :3

You don't have to. XD;

Anyway. Awesome read.

-FemaleTengu-

I really do like these little one shots you are putting out. In some ways though they would be a good begining to a story.