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person animefreak492
schedule November 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i realy enjoyed this. Loved the bit of a twist that you added at the end ^_^
schedule August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good thing she had her magical purple rape-dust on hand... This has to be one of my favorites, just because I haven't read another roleplay one that was that good, especially where Kagome is the one decides to kick it up a notch. Good job on the conversations and grammar as well, seems like most fics nowadays are written by dyslexic kindergartners who just learned what a keyboard is. +10 writing to you.
schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice work on this one. I like the way Kagome uses his inu instincts against him to dominate him. Very well done, and I would love to read more!
person Vyper
schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked that Inuyasha had agreed to have Kagome dominate him.