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That previous review was just an attempt at bad humor. I thought it might make ya laugh. Anyway I am glad that the brothers acknowledged their feeling for one another and it will be fun to see where it takes them. I think Koga is getting a bit frustrated with losing to Inuyasha so much. Perhaps next time they race it would be nice to see almost a tie between the two of them.

I liked the update! I thought you did well on it. Granted, racing isn't my cup of tea but it still is interesting. I liked the last part of the chapter a lot. I thought it was interesting and a bit cliff-hangerish but you finally include Sesshomaru in the story as someone other than Inuyasha's kind sponsor. Good luck with the next chapter! I look forward to reading it soon.

oh god!you always write such exciting fics! i'm anxious to a sex scene IN a fast car... don't make me wait pleasseee

And so it begins. First it is just harmless brotherly love and then you find yourself in bed with your brother with morning wood. From there you go down the path of silent seduction to a full out what the hell did I just do scenerio. Next thing ya know you are getting married in Vegas to said half brother only to find out the hard way that Vegas doesn't do gay marriage so you have to drive all the way to Washington DC to hook up. Then you realize when all this is said and done that you shouldn't have drunk all that jungle juice because now your brother is pissed off at you since you threw up on his plush white carpet only to find out that demon males indeed can give birth. Once that happens you become the bitch in more ways than one and you find yourself crying over car comercials since it reminds you of your days of youth when you were once a racecar driver, but in the end everything works out except you go into labor and you can't rush to the hospital because, lets face it......if men can have babies they would take you to a science lab where they would do experiments on your ass. So no matter what you do always remember that drinking and driving dose not always throw you in jail, but can make your life a living hell.
This is exactly my point, but your the writer here so let's hope that there is no bloodshed from Sesshoumaru's cuddling fetish. All he really wanted was a teddy bear and that will be his excuse in the morning since feared demon Lords do not cuddle.

I like the story so far. My only question is will you be putting more interaction between Sesshomaru , Inuyasha and Kouga? Also, please let Inuyasha be seme at least once in the story. Thanks and keep up the great writing.

I like how you do the time lines. It makes for an easier read. Great story so far. I look forward to more.

nice. looking forward to the races. they sound fun.

I hope you are not ending the story. I really like this story. It is good and you haven't even gotten to the juicy parts yet. Please update.

Man I remember reading this story but lost site of it. I love care and Inu brothers I say you have a good mix. I can't wait to read more.

It's an interesting story. I like the plot line and the slower build up to a relationship. I enjoyed this story so far and I hope to read more soon!