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by kougaslover

schedule April 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh...LOL, I was wondering if and when the cops were ever going to show up. Seems they've been trying their luck, all these races and nobody getting in trouble yet. Inuyasha better think fast. Street race? What street race? I was just speeding, my apologies officer, I'll take that speeding ticket now, LOL. Can't wait to see what really happens. Keep up the awesome work!
person Elisa
schedule April 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story makes me want to become a race car driver and travel the world. I was never a car girl but I find myself googling the cars in this story and I want each one lol I'm glad for the update! I love your writing style and the relationships between the characters.
schedule April 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
And Inuyasha, with his ears and experience, would know the sound of a blow-off valve in his sleep, I bet. LOL, loved your description of the movie in your beginning a/n. The guy hit a bulldozer and was 'killed to death'? LOL. Good chapter. Of course, I believed Inuyasha right away 'cause he never would've put his own reputation on the line by accusing somebody of cheating if he wasn't positive he knew what he heard, but the instant the guy started going off and refusing to open the hood it only became that much more apparent that he was cheating. Or maybe I should say 'bonnet', since it was a Mini, ;-). Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You know, I bet you're right, LOL. I bet Sesshoumaru did set the whole thing up (or at least hinted something to Kouga, knowing the horny ookami could handle the rest all on his own) just so that he can then 'punish' Inuyasha for it later, LOL. Can't place the movie reference off the top of my head; I know I could google it from the clues you gave, but that'd be cheating, so I'll let it go for whoever actually knows it. ;-) OH! Hahaha, thought you'd get a kick out of this - the second word in the Captcha is Street, swear to God. Even AFF must be a fan of this story! Ha!
schedule April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
LOL, no, I think that came out exactly as you meant it to, and all joking aside I'm actually glad 'cause my major turn off in most Inu/Sess fics is when the author turns Kagome into a bitch who hurt Inuyasha in some way or another. Same goes for Sess/Kag that features Inuyasha leaving her for Kikyou. I don't mind Inu/Sess where Kag's just a friend, but hey, if she's a friend with benefits, as is the case with your story, then the more the merrier! LOL. On that note, does Sesshoumaru know Kouga (and I'm assuming Ginta and Hakkaku?) are about to tag team his otoutou? I'm assuming it's okay, otherwise Kouga is being very ballsy, and Sesshoumaru did say he might let Kouga mount Inuyasha after he'd had him first, which has now happened, so I guess I'll just have to wait and see what happens later on as to whether or not Inuyasha will be 'punished' for his indiscretions. Seems to me the 'mating' rules are less strict in this universe, LOL, and I'm loving every minute of it. Keep up the awesome work!
schedule March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Funny thing i started reading this and it stuck with me that i have seen this writing style before, even though the author name didnt register with me. but i actually discovered you over on Fanfiction with your Comming of Age story. so finding you in a more adult site with less restrictions makes me really exited because i love your attention to detail as well as your writing in general i can't wait for more!
person Elisa
schedule March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love how you portray both Inuyasha and Sesshomaru in this story. I love the relationship that both have with one another. It's refreshing to see them on friendly terms and getting along. Anyway I love all your stories and can't wait to read more from you.
schedule March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awww, so glad you're bringing Kagome back into this. I think that's cool of Sesshoumaru, that he'd said before in a previous chapter that Inuyasha could invite Kagome to come along and be a part of their lives as well. Looks like Inuyasha might just be able to have his cake and eat it too, ;-).
schedule March 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
LOL, true, true. Ah well...enough about cars, although that teaser for next chapter at the end there sounded awesome. Inuyasha can't really complain too much when he gets to race the best cars on the best roads, now can he? I thought it was cool how they were each realizing just how perfectly they fit together, from their respective roles, Sesshoumaru loving being on top of Inuyasha and Inuyasha loving having Sesshoumaru on top of him. They really are a good match, then. Love all the quips, too. Most Inu/Sess stories have an honestly sadistic Sesshoumaru literally beating Inuyasha into submission, so I greatly prefer this style, where Inuyasha still talks back, and he gets 'tortured' in pleasurable ways, only. Sesshoumaru's still sadistic, but the fun kind, LOL.
schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Don't forget how Cadillac, Chevrolet, Oldsmobile (though they're gone now), Buick, Hummer, Pontiac and obviously GMC are all GM owned. My husband sells Cadillacs, so I guess I know a little about cars. Very little, LOL. You're right, though, there really are only a few select parent companies that then break it down into multiple categories. Scion is also Toyota; I really love those things. Don't really have anything against Toyota, they're a good company, but once, several years ago, my husband and I got into an argument with somebody in a parking lot, can't even remember what about, and getting into our GMC truck the guy was all "Nice generic Chevy" all super sarcastic, as he proceeded to head towards his Lexus. I shouted "Nice overpriced Toyota!" and then we drove away, LOL. Anyhoo, enough about cars, it's time for the sex chapter! Definitely looking forward to it. ;-)