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for Game of Cat and Mouse

by sherlock

person kmoaton
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was totally surprised at this twist in the story! I can't wait to see how "SilverClaw" reacts to Kouga!! I am really enjoying this so much! I can't wait until you update!!
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, fuck you for stopping there ToT

xD Man, Inuyasha had extensive wounds, yeesh! I hope he heals soon! Now I'm just more anxious to know what will happen next :3 Sesshomaru's attracted to Silverclaw and just learned his name but both of their history together is nothing but brutality and rape (however brief it was, it was still a violent introduction). It will be interesting to see how they work past that, and all the sexy encounters they may have along the way!

Good job! I look forward to more :)

-DM
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope Inuyasha doesn't give in too easily to Sesshoumaru. I hope he actually makes Sesshoumaru work for his affections, perhaps even make the man suffer for a while for what he did. Thanks for the fast update! I look forward to more.
person Vyper
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think that your chapter should have been longer. Thanks for updating. I really like this story.
person Buumkin
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes. Just yes. Please? Because finals week is coming up and my brain doesn't function without depraved and delicious pr0nz. Which you provide with most excellence.
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nnnnoooooo don't make the next chapter shorter!!!! .... by the way, i absolutely loved this chapter, loved it. awwww sess and inu are soooo cute together. can't wait to see how inu reacts when he's more coherent, and how sess handles it. please write the next chap soon
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked this one, I'm kind of surprised there wasn't an outright apology from Sess, but then with Inu that might not have worked that well anyway. Glad to see his mental state is fairly undamaged, I don't really get the stories where he's totally shattered. I know it can happen to anyone, but he's just tough as nails. Great work, and I can't wait to read more!
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omfggggg. Dark and sexy and I'm so fucking anxious to read more! GREAT job! You totally captured the severity of both the crime Sesshoumaru thought Inuyasha committed and the realization of his error!! WOO! I look forward to more!

-DM
schedule December 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Sesshoumaru's stubborn, pig-headed ass better fix this mistake as soon as possible. Although, I doubt it will be that easy to fix. If he is ever going to get on Silverclaw's good side, he is probably going to have to do a lot kissing ass. I look forward to the next update. I love this fic. Thanks for sharing.
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Inuyasha! Sesshoumaru as a bastard to him (which is about normal) he damn well better make it up to him. What happened to Inuyasha's hips? Who killed Myoga? Does Sesshoumaru have the gnads to apologize? Will Inuyasha be able to forgive him? Write on!