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I think Koga should win Inuyasha's heart. They were best friends first and Sesshoumaru like raped him so he doesn't really deserve him in this story.

Good chappie, I like the bits of the past and the tatto. But I hope Inuyasha punches Kouga...he's Sesshoumaru's damnit. Even if Inuyasha doesn't like him. Which he has complete reason to hate him. I hope Sesshoumaru can win him back. But killing Kouga would be bad, and just hurt Inuyasha...so Sesshoumaru might have to let Inuyasha go *sniff* As unlikely as that is, unless Inuyasha choses him. Grr.

I read this like, four seconds after you posted. But then I was feeling resentful for the whole cliffhanger thing and the whole deal where the chapter ended... And in retrospect that wasn't awesome of me. Because it was a cute chapter. And I'm gonna need to to write more. Also, do you have a Ygal? It's so much easier for me to notice things that I want more of on Ygal...

Well Sesshoumaru has got his work cut out for him. Wooing Inuyasha right now after being so damn mean to him will take more than pretty words. I really feel for Inuyasha and I totally understand if Inuyasha hates Sesshoumaru in this story. He was raped by the guy and beaten almost to death. I would have run away too.

I am glad Inuyasha is still as stubborn as ever. He is so ADORABLE that way. HA! Take that Sesshoumaru, someone will now be a constant thorn in your side when it comes to gaining Inuyasha's affections. I love these complications, so please keep the chapters coming.

Great plot! The longer chapter was great. I dislike short chapter because it such
a short read. Great idea making Sesshoumaru a mafia boss. Most writers have him a
businessman. Fun, making everybody think SilverClaw is a female.

Ummm... A little advice with the chapters... 'To long' doesn't exist with fanfic chapters, the longer the better. Just avoid cliffhangers like the one at the end of fourth chapter and you'll do fine.

You write well and I can hardly wait for more. Merry christmas!

*bounces happily* yay! update...update.. update!! *singing* i love the nice twist you have setup with Koga. *snickers* ohhh the fun he'll bring but the fact that the korean mafia think silverclaw is female heherhehehehehehehehe... poor poor inuyasha! and no the chapter wasn't too long. as long as it is interesting and riviting to the audience, a chapter is never too long. ^^ please keep teh goodness coming.

really great!!! yeah i would like to see someone make inu therew wife(hehehe) they will have another thing coming if they do.keep up the long chappie's

Oh wow I just started reading your story and like wow talk about starting out with a bang very cool indeed. Well looks like Sessh stole Inuyasha's cherry but that may be all he's left with if Kouga takes the whole plant or tree or body depending on the case may be. What will Sessh do it's not like he's endeared himself to little sweet Inuyasha so far I mean he's beaten and raped him for doing nothing but trying to help. Now what will Kouga do I wonder this is really sounding like a story I want to continue reading especially as it sounds so far like you have a great imagination so I'll be waiting for your next update with great anticipation. And so far the length of your chapters is fine if it's a great story people will read it no matter the length although I kind of like long ones myself.