rate_review Reviews

Happy New Year! I was curious so I went to the site you posted 2 c the pic of Silverclaw, but it wasn't there! T_T

I'm hoping 2 c chapter 9 soon!

B reading U!

:)

Miroku is lucky Inuyasha is so awesome! I was wondering if Naraku was going to make an appearance and now I have my answer. I can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru reacts to Inuyasha's heroism. He'll probably try to shelter Inuyasha and then get his ass handed to him for his efforts. Thanks for the update. It was long awaited.

the woman is kagura (black hair, tag: Aruga K.), isn't see? and she works for naraku (spider).

I love sess/inu. Love how they're interacting. and sess is sooo hot... by the way, kouga should die for even daring to kiss inu. Inu only belongs to sess. Kouga needs to die.........

about #7...

I must admit I almost didn't read this because you
mentioned 'rapefic' in your summary, but I made the
mistake at glancing at the first chapter & realized
this wasn't going to be something that would completely
turn me off.

At least the humor carries through the whole story to
balance it out.

Chapter 6 review:
Ahhhhhh!!1 Okay so here's my squeeing:

"Not only was Kouga’s inferiority to Sesshomaru crystal clear.." NO SHIT! HAHA! I'm so all for Sesshomaru in this fic. Kouga's a little bitch. I don't care if he is dangerous and or the kingpin, Sesshomaru all the way! WOO!

I freaking yelled out when I read the part where Sesshomaru all but SWOOPED in! OMFG!! (sorry I'm totally fangirling) This sentence sent waves of thrills through me, let me tell you: One second, Sesshomaru was tightening his rough grip around his bicep while pouring his very soul into Inuyasha with mere eye contact.. Holy fuck! Very powerful sentence for some reason. Gah, you're so awesome. omg omgomgggg he confessed~!!

*freaksandspazzes and goes on to read the next chapter*

-DM

Chapter 7 review:
First, yes, I'm reading this and reviewing at the same time. I think it helps to get the general essence of my reaction across xD

Second, eeyup, Inuyasha description of Sesshomaru in the beginning is very accurate for what he said, so I agree with him ("Yup, you couldn’t get more psychotic than that."). xD

omfg I totally rofl at everything Inuyasha says, especially here: “Because you have mental problems, man!”

I'm slightly amused of how perplexed Sesshomaru is of how his tactics of seduction aren't working on Inuyasha xD Stupid hanyou, that's only gonna make him want you more xD

Woot I'm glad Inu gave in. Damn this chapter was nice. omnomnom. I think you should concentrate on writing as you do. You seem to do fine just doing that. And while I'm not an editor I didn't see a lot of mistakes that would stop me from reading through chapters smoothly (if I catch one I'll usually mention it; granted I was rather engrossed in dominantomfgiwantyouinuyasha Sesshomaru but lol)

Great job! I'm sooooo happy to see this many chapters updated! Hope to see more soon :D


-DM

i like it you sould keep it.can't wait for more to come soon.

I'm quite glad Sesshoumaru stopped, he really needs to learn no means no. And regain some of his self control. I'm still curious, who killed Myoga and shot Inuyasha first? Hopefully Inuyasha will be able to shed some light on that soon :)