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for Black and White World

by Akikazehana

person Vyper
schedule March 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this oneshot. I want more. I would write an add on to this story, but I have my own story right now I need to finish. Maybe I will come back later.
schedule March 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it :) the chapters you choose to write made me all fluttery ^^ I love good, emotional fluff. I wrote Silver and Gold based from the first chapter and idk, that's just kinda what came out. Hope you yourself write more!
person Vyper
schedule September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was so hot. I loved this oneshot although I would love to see this as a story.
person Vyper
schedule December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a beautiful story. I like how you incorperate the suroundings with the two brother's emotions. It is nearly poetic.
person Vyper
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A sad yet romantic ending.
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story I hope it continues. R u serious?! I would but I am not good at Inu/sess couples. I might make it OOC. Hope YOU continue it though.
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow... everybody dies? that harsh... but I like it :)
Good job on that chapter!
Soooo... Sess and Inu survive... now any other versions? Come on, don't be shy... I'll give my version later on... as soon as there are a bit more different endings :)
(the silly author)
person nchsmi
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good job on the second chapter!

B reading U!
person nchsmi
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh...F**k hot cocoa and coffee! I'll take hot sex on a cold winter night anytime, anyplace! This was the BOMB!

I wish you would add a new chapter.

B reading U!