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January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So, so sweet, and so so sexy. Great work, I loved every word of it. The way Sesshomaru is able to control Sage's mind as well as his body is just excellent. And, now I can't wait to read about Sage getting his collar, and some of these exploits involving Kouga (I hope?!). Also, just wondering, but as he is acknowledging Sage as a brother in this, at least to himself, is there any chance of Inuyasha coming into the picture, such as a second slave to Sesshomaru? Either way, excellent work, and I can't wait to read more!
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December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have never liked OCs but I am enjoying this, it's very well written. Great job and keep up the good work!
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November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't generally enjoy stories with OCs but your story definitely has my interest....if this story gets as interesting as Claiming Kin, I will definitely follow it...btw, is Claiming Kin abandoned?
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November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think this chapter was very well written although Sesshoumaru seems a bit out of character...a bit too....mellow? And unsure...But perhaps we'll get to see his dark side soon enough...or maybe your intention was to show him younger than in the manga? Midori's character was very original and a refreshing change from the usual simpering big breaasted bimbos....I especially liked the idea that Sesshoumaru has nobility serving him...and the scene with Sage panicking with his head under the water was well done...keep it up!
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November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes! Please continue this story. I really enjoy the spin you've put on Sesshomaru, making him a little unsure of himself. This is so different from Claiming Kin. I love the original character as well. I would recommend this or any story you guys write. Thanks for coming up with another great fic. I look forward to more, and I hope I don't have to wait too long. You guys rock!
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November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A gift : a new story from you two ! Sage is very nice, I can't wait to know how he is as a human...
The good and hilarious passage was when I imagined Sesshomaru's reaction at the discovery of the possibility of parasites in Sage's fur !!! Poor Sessh ! He has been as brave as his slave here !
Thank you for your story !
French reader,
Merely Truth
The good and hilarious passage was when I imagined Sesshomaru's reaction at the discovery of the possibility of parasites in Sage's fur !!! Poor Sessh ! He has been as brave as his slave here !
Thank you for your story !
French reader,
Merely Truth
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November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wait ! I didn't thing right ! Sage's mother had double fangs ! His father being full youkai and his mother obviously youkai or hanyou, Sage can't become human one night in the month !!! Ne ??
I don't understand ?
Well, wait and see !
Merely Truth
I don't understand ?
Well, wait and see !
Merely Truth
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November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, it's my from DeviantART!
this story is awesome! please update soon!
this story is awesome! please update soon!
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November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More people in the IY fandom need to be introduced to the goodness that is Sage. Hopefully some of Sage's cultist's...er...fans...will come on over and enjoy a new Sage.
*grin*
Plus, I just don't DO zero reviews dangit.
*grin*
Plus, I just don't DO zero reviews dangit.
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November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You characterization of Sess is really interesting. He's cold, yet curious. Kind and yet still dangerous.
Not sure yet if I like your version of Inu though. I get this is AU but I definatly look forward to his personal growth.
Not sure yet if I like your version of Inu though. I get this is AU but I definatly look forward to his personal growth.