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for Sesshoumaru's Slave

by salomewilde

schedule February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I love the interaction between these two, the way they both seem to break each other's facades is wonderful. And, Sesshomaru is the most wonderful, kinkiest dog! Great work, and I can't wait to read more!
person Xilex90
schedule January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay! you updated! ^^

Next chapters, please!
person ardentes
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is soo neat! I really enjoy it! I love Sage, he is so cute! I want a Sage for myself. I love this story and cannot wait to read more! Please update soon! I want to see what happens next!
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this variation of Akemi. The version of her on Claiming Kin is very interesting, but we've seen so little of her there. I love how she interacts with Sesshomaru here - very nearly as an equal in some ways, but always remembering not to overstep the bounds imposed on her by the difference between their status. It's going to be fun if Sesshomaru should decide to invite her into his bed while Sage is there too! We need more strong, confident females like Akemi and Midori in this story, as there are relatively few with such a nature and personality in Claiming Kin.
schedule January 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, the relationship between these two is purely stunning. I love how much Sesshomaru cares for Sage, even though he is such a strong, alpha male personality and can be a tad sadistic at times, which is so perfectly in character for him. And, the yaoi between them is excellent, I can't wait to read more and to see how Sage reacts to his new collar. Excellent, excellent work!
person ardentes
schedule January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That's sooo sad! Oh my goodness, the ending of this chapter made me very sad. I hope Sesshomaru helps out Sage. I usually dislike author made characters but I cannot help but fall for Sage. You did him soo very well, that it is convincing, not to mention delicious. I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update when you can!!!
person satterb
schedule January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww. It's cute and sad at the same time. I really want to know more about Sage's mother now. I look forward to more of this story. I was surprised to see an update so soon. Thanks for the treat!
person industrialmidnight
schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I LOVE this fic! I think it's absolutely AMAZING! Sage is such the perfect little slave, and Sesshomaru is a deliciously intense master. I can't wait to read another chapter of this and see how Sesshomaru indulges Sage next.
person satterb
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No one can describe a fuck quite like you two! Thanks for updating this story. I love it so. I love that Sesshoumaru talks (and likes to) during sex. Please keep up the GREAT work, and Happy New Year!
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It isn't easy for fanfiction readers to warm to OCs, but I _love_ Sage! The boy is an absolutely delightful character, and one cannot help but feel for him and for all that he has been through. I doubt that things will be easy for him, especially when he finally learns who his father is. But you've written him as the kind of boy that you really want to root for, so I hope all will be well - more than well - for him in the end. I also love it that you can make a chapter so completely hot, then have me laughing at Sesshomaru's obsession with remaining "flealess". You're doing an excellent job here, so please keep going!