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I don't usually reviews on this site but for this story I MUST! I definitely knew what I was getting myself into when I chose an incomplete story (possible heartache) and I certainly got it! I never do this but again I feel I MUST! I beg you both can you find it in your wonderful hearts to continue and finish this story? Please? Pretty pleeease? It's an amazing story. I love the way you both write; your take on this universe and the characters; and I absolutely adore Sage! You know you're doing something right if an OC is so damg endearing you don't even miss the cannon character of the story (in this case Inuyasha). I sincerely hope you come back to the story one day cause it is soo delicious! Either way thank you to both authors for writing it and even more for sharing it with us. Warm hugs to both of you and much love :)

Awesome storyline, enjoyable in its own right even if claiming kin is great! Please update! I love sage!

SO VERY GOOD I HOPE THERE IS MORE TO COME

Chapter 9's so playfully erotic, but also intense at the point where Sesshomaru reveals Sage's real identity to Koga. I'm wondering what will happen if Sage finds out from someone else other than Sesshomaru that he is his half-brother. And you've built up the sexual tension so well between the two royal princes that I'd love to read what they get up to in the next chapter!

Aw! Come on!!! That's not fair, and you know it! LOL I really really hope there's an update soon. I really love dirty talking Kouga! I love these two together. I look forward to more.

Oh my goodness! I am sooooo happy you updated this story! It is one of my all-time favorite Inuyasha stories! I was kind of annoyed that it stopped off suddenly, but damn was it a great chapter! I like how absolutely precious but delicious Sage is. I want one for myself! I enjoy how Kouga and Sesshomaru get along. I also like how you have the possibility of a delicious threesome next chapter! I do hope you update soon! I really want to know what happens next, especially how Sage reacts to a threesome and how Sage reacts to finding out he's Sesshomaru's younger brother. Anyway, I wish you luck with the next chapter!

You have yet another masterpiece in the works ^_^ Your talent amazes me

You describe Sage's reactions to the overwhelming scents so well in Chapter 8. That's exactly the first thing that would strike his senses, as he is half-inu, and would process a lot through his sense of smell. He's so delicate in his caution, treading the edge of fear that he will disappoint his master, that we can empathise with him throughout.

I also like the way you switched to the gardener's point of view - it expressed the gardener's own personality as well as it conveys a sense of how carefully things are managed and run in the palace, and everything has its proper place and manner.

I assume that Koga will be friendly, but I hope he doesn't overwhelm Sage!

AH. This is very well written with perfect descriptions. To be honest, I cannot seem to get enough of it as I have finished all the chapters so far in under thirty minutes! I find this to be most intriguing and eagerly await the next chapter - and also when Inupapa will return! ^^

There's much potential for plot and character development with this new talent of Sage's that you've introduced to us. What will he learn that his master doesn't want him to learn, and how will it affect him?

I also like the way you're delicately treating the manner in which they are both finding their way with each other - they don't really understand each other yet, but it is clear that they could know each other very well, better than anyone else does, given time and opportunity.