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by Darkinudemon

schedule September 19, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I have to say, I’m very discussed at this story. What a horrible thing to do to Inuyasha. He isn’t some mindless animal that should be controlled over.  People don’t treat people like animals and they don’t go castrating them for fun. For kagome to do this to Inuyasha is unforgivable. He should have left her the minute he recovered.

schedule June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just curious if you are still writing anything these days. I know your profile mentions you started a new job and put your stories on hold, but it's been a while and I'm just curious if you are still writing anything or kicking any ideas around at the least. I really love your work, and would love to read more if you ever get around to writing and posting more!
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
suprised he didnt killed her or even got mad at her.
person Nesha85
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I did not like the ending. You stated that Inuyasha crime could not be forgiven but Sango did forgive
him. Plus, it was not like Inuyasha wanted to attack Sango or Kagome. He could not control his beast.
Sesshoumaru would have helped because he would not want Inuyasha shaming the family by not being able
to control himself. Sesshoumaru had done so in the anime after the first time Inuyasha turn full demon.
Inuyasha never learn how to actually control his demon side and Kagome betrayed him. Kagome did not
dominant him, she trapped him when he was weakest and took advantage of it. True dominance come from
being able to go head to head and win. Inuyasha will live longer than Kagome, did he not have
the right to have another family. A better ending would have been Kagome leaving or Inuyasha getting help.
He is not a pet and people do not castrate people even sex criminal. Inuyasha could have stayed for the puppy
but as for loving Kagome, I can not see it. I could never trust the person again. Your ending does not make
sense to me.
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, I'm sad it's over. I will be looking forward to your next stories. I hope to get everything with your account figured out. And thanks for writing your stories they way you want them, not the happy endings some people asked for. I loved it.
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, no it's over. I do like the thought of an enchanted cock ring though, especially with Kagome's ability to keep him up for as long as she wants. Devilish! I do hope, at some point, you might come back to it, perhaps another seperate epilogue or different (still kninky) ending. Still, I thought this was a great way to end it, and a great fic overral. Seriously, I went from the first chapter thinking this was just some man-hater torturing Inu for no reason to finding it one of the best stories I've read on this site, full of both plenty of awesome kink and a very deep storyline. As for Kouga getting his, just as long as he ultimately ends up in good circumstances. I have to say though, the next one sounds particularly brutal, though somehow not outside what I could see Sango doing to poor Inu. Well, I suppose all good things must come to an end, and this sweet fic is no different. Excellent work!
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, now poor little Inu is stuck with taking it from Kagome? Perhaps she'll really lay into him and have Kouga or Sesshomaru (or both) join her in pleasing her mate's new found desires. I will say, while the notion of him being castrated really kind of grossed me out at first, I like that he found out he likes anal, and I like that he actually almost seems to like being submitted and de-manned. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here!
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You are a good writer but I have to say this story itself is very DISAPPOINTING. Your characters are schitzophrentic or bipolar or something.

And question for you. You are a guy, why did you want to write about castration? I know you like dark stories but it would really shut me up if you could answer that.
person Vyper
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am suprised that Inuyasha is being so forgiving. I would think he would hate Kagome. I know if I was him I would kill her when I got the chance if it was not for the fact he got her pregnant.
person Nesha85
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am sad at Inuyasha reaction. I wanted him to be angery. Not my favorite chapter.