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Hi i was wondering if you were going to finish this story? and also im on dokuga and was wondering if you were a member so i could follow you're work there?

I just found this site and read your story and i just wanted to say that i love this story already and cant wait for the next chapter.

Love this story so far! I really like it and I hope you get more chapters soon.

I really enjoy this fic! But I feel I should tell you: Japanese people do not curtsey. They bow, the deeper the bow the greater the respect and formality the deepest bow I know of (I think) is the kow-tow. Here's a site that should help... If you have questions about customs, "dress" styles or Japanese religion, don't feel frustrated! Look it up, and you'll thank yourself later down the line. I know I have! (**Free Advice is worth what you pay for it, so take this to heart or don't it was meant in the purest sense of sincerity...**)
http://gojapan.about.com/cs/etiquetteinjapan/a/bowing.htm
The most informal bow is a bend of about 15 degrees for a casual greeting. In casual daily life situations, bowing is often a nod of the head. The most common type of bow is done to a 30-degree angle to greet customers or to thank someone. It's often seen in Japanese business situations. A more formal way of bowing is performed to a 45-degree angle looking down at your feet. This type of bow signifies deep gratitude, a respectful greeting, a formal apology, asking for favors, and so on.

Good luck to you in the future!
JoWashington

I want to see where this is going but I wish there had been some info on how Kagome felt about Sessh before this started. Then it would explain the reason for her accepting this situation so suddenly

Ilove your story and I can't wait for you to hurry with the next chapter. But I think you should find a beta reader. I believe you are a dynamic writer but you need a beta reader to correct your mistakes.

Good story idea, but way too many typos and a lot of repetition. And it's way too short.