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by TheKaytla

person nchsmi
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG...this was hilarious, I'm LMAO! It sounds like my Joey on our honeymoon!-LOL! I wonder if Inu will get pregnant! LOL! I can just imagine the reactions THAT would bring! Sesshomaru would be honor bound to stay with his 'husband' and their 'child'! Or maybe they played the 'Big' game and have to be together for the winnings! LOL! I can't wait to read how this turns out!

Speaking of hangover, will Mike Tyson make a cameo in this one too? Maybe he was Sesshomaru's best man! LOL!

Tyson-"Hey, U 2 Lovebirds! How's mawwiage tweating youse?!"

Great job!

B reading U!
person Addiena_Saffir
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
We apologize for the missing review that should be filling this space. Unfortunately the reader/reviewer is currently to busy. This humble servant would like to tell you that the reader enjoyed the story tremendously. At least i assume she did, since she has been laughing hysterically and pounding my poor desk for the last 5 minutes and shows no signs of stopping. In so saying i have fullfilled my obligation of letting you, the author, of my Lady's, the reviewer, opinion of your submission. Have a good day.
person fluffiebunny
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, I am so glad you decided to update so soon!!!
Sesshomaru's point of view is hilarious!
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is Awesome please tell me you are writing more. I want to ready everything they are about to go through. please update
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was fummy. and different good story. However I find the Sesshy being drunk and not remembering much more unlikely tat Inu - were the drinks spiked??
person kale
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!!
Sess's reaction is priceless. I can't wait to see the rest of his reaction, he's such a control freak. You just know it's going to be a major breakdown.
person toni
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awsome-ness i cant wait for a new chapter. hope you write swiftly and may the muse of imagination be your guide.
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sweet Update! Of course they could get a divorce, but I hope they don't believe in that kinda thing. Hope you update agiain please!
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A very promising first two chapters. I would love to see where you take this. I can feel just how mortified both the brothers must be!
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank you So much for updating so soon! The chapter was absolutely awesome....except that it ended so soon! Please writ the next chapter soon! I can't wait to know what actually happened, what their decision will be, if they'll remember their 'night'...ya, basically the whole story ;P but please do update soon!