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for Oh, Shit

by TheKaytla

person Vyper
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. I live in Vegas so this story is right up my ally. I just wanted to tell you that (Not that it matters) Nevada does not acknowledge same sex marriages. Still, hope you keep writing and I will keep reading.
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh you have to continue. We need Sesshoumaru's side. This was too funny.
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you have to do more. Please? Pretty please??? This sounds like it could be really fun! thanks!
person Solarina
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes,yes, please continue!
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
heheh this would make a very good series and i'd love to see it continue. *evil grins* ohh teh possabilities. i'll be keeping an eye to see what you decide.
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I love it. I hope Miroku has the video footage. I would also love to see Sesshoumaru's reaction...was he aware at the time and snagged his brother when he had the chance? Or was he just as oblivious as Inuyasha? You could make it a small series...
person nchsmi
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, shit is right! This was very humorous, I like it! It kind of reminds me of that Ashton Kusener movie, Honeymoomn in Vegas. What I want too know is what Sesshomaru's reaction will be. I hope he demands more of his husbandly rights from InuYasha!

Good job!

B reading U!
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my god...please you must write more chapters...please!!!! god, this can turn into SUCH a good story!...this chapter was good though.
person Spaz666
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think this would end fine where you have it but if you're feeling up to it, it would be fun to write. I know it would be fun to read =)

As to the no gay marriage, if there are no demons as sexy as Sesshy running around then I figure you can call it artistic liscense. Some people are so realistic.
person kale
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're right this story does have potential. Your first chapter was solid and had enough background so that your premise makes sense. I hope you continue this fic.